The Stare of Sister Greene
Pray her stare doesn't find you!104 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Nuns as teachers have a reputation of not putting up with anything. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Nuns as teachers have a reputation of not putting up with anything. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Charlie.
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You're welcome, Dean. Charlie
Comment from Benjohnsonjr
Im giving you five stars half of which are for that picture which creeped me out on another level. I have the exact same feeling bout nuns...and clowns.
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Im giving you five stars half of which are for that picture which creeped me out on another level. I have the exact same feeling bout nuns...and clowns.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
Comment from jackpeg
If you're a student in a Catholic school, don' show this one to the nuns. This is really scary. Which a lot of nuns are without the hideous make-over of your picture. One more thing: no nun is ever named Sister Greene.
Greene is a Sir name. Sister is always followed by a first name like Mary, Margarita or Agnus. No, I'm not a priest.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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If you're a student in a Catholic school, don' show this one to the nuns. This is really scary. Which a lot of nuns are without the hideous make-over of your picture. One more thing: no nun is ever named Sister Greene.
Greene is a Sir name. Sister is always followed by a first name like Mary, Margarita or Agnus. No, I'm not a priest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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I didn't think you were, Jack, and thanks for the four stars...
Comment from Oatmeal
Dean Kuch,
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem and it was very scary.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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Dean Kuch,
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem and it was very scary.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
Comment from BunnyS
Okay... so the poem is really good, although creepy, but your pictures give me nightmares!I always have to scroll past as quickly as possible and mute my computer so that I can read the piece. If I were one of those people that liked to be scared, you would be my go to scarer!!
Having admitted what a wimp I am, I still know a good poem, or story, when I read it, and you are an excellent writer!! Thank you so much for my racing heart! :)
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Okay... so the poem is really good, although creepy, but your pictures give me nightmares!I always have to scroll past as quickly as possible and mute my computer so that I can read the piece. If I were one of those people that liked to be scared, you would be my go to scarer!!
Having admitted what a wimp I am, I still know a good poem, or story, when I read it, and you are an excellent writer!! Thank you so much for my racing heart! :)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
Comment from Rmocruz
Thank you in advance for tonight's nightmare.
An exceptional presentation throughout.
The verse, the visual, as well as the creepy audio-
Exceptional!
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Thank you in advance for tonight's nightmare.
An exceptional presentation throughout.
The verse, the visual, as well as the creepy audio-
Exceptional!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
Comment from Delahay
Some of those nuns could be quite terrifying, no doubt. They could be a menace with a ruler. A nun as a source of nightmares is easy to picture, especially with a little twist added for Halloween.
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Some of those nuns could be quite terrifying, no doubt. They could be a menace with a ruler. A nun as a source of nightmares is easy to picture, especially with a little twist added for Halloween.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
what a picture dean to start of with it really held and grasped you in the piece smiling always a pleasure dear friend reading your piece
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what a picture dean to start of with it really held and grasped you in the piece smiling always a pleasure dear friend reading your piece
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
Comment from MickeyV
Gulp. Wow, that was really cool and eerie! Okay, where is this music coming from? I'm looking over at my co-worker's cell phone. Is that you Sister Greene? The pic is horrifying too. Great job!
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Gulp. Wow, that was really cool and eerie! Okay, where is this music coming from? I'm looking over at my co-worker's cell phone. Is that you Sister Greene? The pic is horrifying too. Great job!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
Comment from w.j.debi
I don't know many nuns, but you will have me wondering the next time I meet one. Sister Greene sounds like a real monster.
Good luck in the contest with your creative and off beat poem.
This has to be your favorite time of year. Happy haunting!
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I don't know many nuns, but you will have me wondering the next time I meet one. Sister Greene sounds like a real monster.
Good luck in the contest with your creative and off beat poem.
This has to be your favorite time of year. Happy haunting!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
