My Love, My Cutie
The beauty of love.6 total reviews
Comment from Acquired Taste
No muss, no fuss - a love you look forward to seeing and holding. I see a little girl but it could be your cat, your puppy or your hamster. Very sweet words for something special to you. AT=/
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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No muss, no fuss - a love you look forward to seeing and holding. I see a little girl but it could be your cat, your puppy or your hamster. Very sweet words for something special to you. AT=/
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you. I wanted others to be able to use the poem for their own personal loved one, child, or pet!!
Comment from Dawny53
Welcome, 1st tima.. love that pen name.. I'm not giving this little piece 5 stars just to be nice or give false encouragement to a first timer! I'm giving it because I feel your writing is warm, and cuddly, and just all around has a good feel to it. Nice work!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Welcome, 1st tima.. love that pen name.. I'm not giving this little piece 5 stars just to be nice or give false encouragement to a first timer! I'm giving it because I feel your writing is warm, and cuddly, and just all around has a good feel to it. Nice work!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you. I try to stay on the more positive side when writing. That's normally my mood.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, 1st Tima...
Cool username!
A lovely poem about the simplicity of love. You nailed it.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Hi, 1st Tima...
Cool username!
A lovely poem about the simplicity of love. You nailed it.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you. Yes, the username fit in there at the time!!
Comment from l.raven
the face of a beauty...the one you love...the one with a smile of an angel...very well written...you did a great job on it...good luck...
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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the face of a beauty...the one you love...the one with a smile of an angel...very well written...you did a great job on it...good luck...
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you. It was more about my children but I wanted to leave it open for others to use for their personal loved one, child, pet, etc.
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you are so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from koolaid228
This describes love in its purest form, doesn't take a lot of words, as a matter of fact I really don't need any to say I love you! I enjoyed reading this poem and thank you for sharing. Ron
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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This describes love in its purest form, doesn't take a lot of words, as a matter of fact I really don't need any to say I love you! I enjoyed reading this poem and thank you for sharing. Ron
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you Ron and I'm glad you liked it. God bless!!
Comment from gypsymoth
I gave four stars because the second line diqualifys
the poem for the contest. You have only six syllables in
that line. You can edit it and re-enter. May use a two
syllable word instead of "A".You could make the line read,
" Precious smile worth more than gold."
Good Luck Gypsymoth
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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I gave four stars because the second line diqualifys
the poem for the contest. You have only six syllables in
that line. You can edit it and re-enter. May use a two
syllable word instead of "A".You could make the line read,
" Precious smile worth more than gold."
Good Luck Gypsymoth
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Great! Thank you for catching that.
