Comment from Maryum Sultan

Excellent

Written 3 years ago, but still breathing. An awesome poem, the words are actually supporting the theme. A love for GOD can be seen in real words. Keep it up buddy ð???ð???ð???

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2017

Comment from Hamza Tariq

Excellent

YOUr poem is just awesom..Keep it up..great effort (Y)i think your words are God Gifted..God will reward u for this faith and love for HIM...

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thank you Hamza .

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Your faith message is proudly and compellingly expressed,
and all of which you affirm about your Faith, is so
true and so glad such a consolation to you. More
people could benefit by such strong and steadfast faith
as yours. This is a great encouragement for them to do so
Thank you for sharing, and keep writing!
Best wishes, Ronni

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thank you very much Ronni .

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

A very unique little poem of positive faith expressed here in this 5-7-5 format. I don't like restricting myself to such styles as I feel it stifles my creativity, but you nailed it.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thank you so much . Some people are God gifted and I think you are one of them

Comment from Leigh Ann

Good

This flows well, I think it is true also, and so wonderful to know God hears us no matter what emotion we approach God with. I was wondering whey 'whenever' and 'forever' were split into two words? It is a very good poem though. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thank you Ann . I think I have to learn more from you people.