Comment from NadineM

Exceptional

Wonderful imagery and magical feel in this well-written poem! Great rhymes and use of alliteration. This poem is pretty... I know; that's a weird description, but I appreciate its beauty. I love fall too and you've presented something I feel is "fall pretty!"
Thanks for sharing this with me. It's been awhile since I've read your words... awesome to see you again!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

Thanks so much, Nadine!

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Jewel, this is just beautiful...you can just lay back and feel the days of Autumn...at there best...I love your poem...and your colors and picture...stunning...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

Thank you!

reply by l.raven on 27-Sep-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

A perfectly rhymed poem with absolute beauty in it's poetic imagery in language and rhythm. Nothing but the best from this talented author.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

thanks my friend!

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Autumn is very nice, and a relief after the heat of the summer. Only trouble is the winter follows. I dislike the cold weather intensely. You have made good use of descriptive language, rhyming and imagery. Enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

I'm in southern New Mexico so I don't mind winter now. smile

Comment from Tonulak

Exceptional

Hi jewel,
This was a lovely autumnal rhapsody. I loved the line about the rhythm of the rain, something that very much reminds me of the season. Lovely rhyme and very gracefully done--Ted

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

thanks Ted! So good to hear from you!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

gorgeous presentation of your poem
solid rhyming couplets including good proximate rhyme
good alliteration in glow/golden and elsewhere
lovely descriptive detail
I really like the upbeat tone in your reflections on this season :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

THANKS!

Comment from lynglyng

Excellent

This poem is excellently done. I thought you did a great job of creating the feel of fall in your word usuage. Great imagery , flow and rhyme.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

thanks for stopping in

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Nicely written. It is my favorite season also. Your words painted a lovely picture in my artist mind. Keep writing and sharing yu work is quite good.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

Thanks

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

It has been tooooo long. But what can I say my muse became lazy in the long, hot days of summer. Your words seem prophetic and resonate with the call I am hearing, too. Both words and art are perfect -- just what I have learned to expect from you.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Hi Jean!
So good to hear from you!
Thank you!

Comment from onebrit

Excellent

I love the picture, it really compliments your sweet piece. I don't like fall, it means winter is on its way...I would happily forever stay under summers spell if I could. Love the way your words just flow so well.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thank you