Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Love the image of the Cesar salad. Your words remind us that this planet is fragile and our time here maybe limited. This is a perfet slam poem,I hope you are able to read it out loud at an open mic.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

Thanks Miss Maid!!!
Shall I compete agasin in Vegas or DC.
with this on a open mic singing?
LOL!
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Comment from SteveY

Excellent

It's an ok poem that adequately expresses your feelings of gloom and doom, but shouldn't we be the barriers of hope and light and love that you feel the world is in so much need of?

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014

Read the end and Charley dies but goes
to Heaven with Arleen!
Thanks Steve!
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Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Ricky, you have mirrored many end time Scriptures in this creative write. The only hope is Jesus and accepting Him as Lord and Savior and God will purge and form a new earth some day soon. The earth simply reflects the effects of the fall of man. No surprise. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014

Thanks Gracie for your time,
incite, and review.
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