Comment from mikemagine

Excellent

Excellent poetry in my opinion. Format, word pictures, and I like the sound! I see zero flaws and I strongly advise you to KEEP WRITING!

Thanks!

Mike

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thank y for the very kind comments and encouragement, Mike. I appreciate it. Debi

reply by mikemagine on 26-Sep-2014

You bet!

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

I have come to enjoy this particular hourglass format - it's like a crescendo. Nicely done goodbye to summer and hello autumn and all that it brings. Good read...AT=/

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

Thank you for the kind comments. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi W.J. Debi,

Great poem about this time of year with school starting, and fall around the corner.

Love the artwork, and your formatting is really cool too. All together a really nice presentation.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thank you for the encouraging review, Jax. I appreciate the kind comments. Debi

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Well penned description of the changing season.
Excellent syllable count for the nonet and reverse nonet
Good use of alliteration --temperature tag, Dawn delays,
moment more each morn,to toss

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

Thank you for the encouraging review. I appreciate your kind remarks about the writing. Debi

Comment from 4hisglory

Excellent

Nicely written and sure does describe Autumn. I like spring better because we have nice weather to look forward to.

Did you mean "down", 3rd to last line?

Your picture and colors were perfect also. Blessings, LaVonne

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

Thank you for the excellent review. I appreciate your kind remarks. I did actually mean "don" as in putting on clothes or attire, in this case they don the fall attire only to toss it away shortly after. I appreciate you watching out for me though. I make mistakes and appreciate all the help I can get.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, w.j. you did an excellent job writing about the changes that take place as the season is about to change. I really enjoyed reading this one...

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014

Thank you for the kind comments. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

What a great poem! So easy on the eyes in your form, so easy on the soul in your words. Really beautiful, written so well! Thanks for sharing it with us

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014

Thank you for the kind words about the form and the words. I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for the encouragement. Debi