September
mirrored nonet47 total reviews
Comment from ragamuffin
An excellent job of a nonet/reverse nonet. Attractive overall presentation and an great description of fall. I think your piece touched on the strongest representations of autumn with a pleasant visual given to go along with a smooth flowing read.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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An excellent job of a nonet/reverse nonet. Attractive overall presentation and an great description of fall. I think your piece touched on the strongest representations of autumn with a pleasant visual given to go along with a smooth flowing read.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I appreciate the kind comments. Debi
Comment from onebrit
Oh this is such a miserable time of year for me....the beauty of summer leaving for the drab dull cold winters. I know a lot of people enjoy winter, I am not one of them. I love the way you made this look like an egg timer, the seeds of summer spilling away.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Oh this is such a miserable time of year for me....the beauty of summer leaving for the drab dull cold winters. I know a lot of people enjoy winter, I am not one of them. I love the way you made this look like an egg timer, the seeds of summer spilling away.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you sharing you insights on the change in seasons. I had not considered that the shape of the poem looked like an egg timer. A good observation. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
Comment from tfawcus
I like the way the hourglass shape your double nonet parallels the dwindling away of the summer and the rise of autumn. What a splendid closing image of the trees decking themselves out in their autumn colours and then tossing their leaves like confetti at a harvest festival!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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I like the way the hourglass shape your double nonet parallels the dwindling away of the summer and the rise of autumn. What a splendid closing image of the trees decking themselves out in their autumn colours and then tossing their leaves like confetti at a harvest festival!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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What an encouraging review. I appreciate the comments about the hourglass shape and the closing image. Thank you so much. Debi
Comment from c_lucas
An excellent poem very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very ggod read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
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An excellent poem very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very ggod read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the kind comments, Charlie. I appreciate your continued encouragement. Debi
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You're welcome, Debi. Charlie
Comment from Wendyanne
Wow I wish I had six stars to give you as this is a gorgeous piece of poetry. Excellent imagery throughout, too many examples for me to choose from. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Wow I wish I had six stars to give you as this is a gorgeous piece of poetry. Excellent imagery throughout, too many examples for me to choose from. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Wendyanne. I appreciate the kind comments and the wish for six stars. This is so encouraging to hear. Debi
Comment from Nosha17
Autumn ushers in a whole new world. You have captured the essence of Autumn very well in your poem. Good use of imagery and descriptive language to convey your message. Enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Autumn ushers in a whole new world. You have captured the essence of Autumn very well in your poem. Good use of imagery and descriptive language to convey your message. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the the excellent review, Faye. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
Comment from jaeladarling
I love the design you made with this piece! Looks awesome. :) And you've got me excited for Fall. It's a bit dreary here today, with gray clouds and some rain. But this poem reminds of the awesome things Fall brings. Great work - thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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I love the design you made with this piece! Looks awesome. :) And you've got me excited for Fall. It's a bit dreary here today, with gray clouds and some rain. But this poem reminds of the awesome things Fall brings. Great work - thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the awesome review. I appreciate the kind comments and the encouragement. Debi
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Deb. So good to see your writing again. Sorry I have missed so much. My book will be out in /Feb or March of 2015 btw. This ism a very well-written poem. I like these lines especially well...very descriptive:
"Trees don their festive attire
pleased to toss leaves like confetti
at the season's grand bon voyage fete"
Goodm job. see you on here soon. Bob
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Hi, Deb. So good to see your writing again. Sorry I have missed so much. My book will be out in /Feb or March of 2015 btw. This ism a very well-written poem. I like these lines especially well...very descriptive:
"Trees don their festive attire
pleased to toss leaves like confetti
at the season's grand bon voyage fete"
Goodm job. see you on here soon. Bob
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Hi Bob. So good to hear from you again. Thank you for the groups six stars! It is much appreciated. I appreciate the encouraging comments as well. Debi
Comment from comanalbert
I love your poem about Summer and Fall . I love the Summer time and I like the Fall too, but the weather is so changeable ...You give a good description of all the the things that happen when Fall is coming .. Great work.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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I love your poem about Summer and Fall . I love the Summer time and I like the Fall too, but the weather is so changeable ...You give a good description of all the the things that happen when Fall is coming .. Great work.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the kind comments about the writing. I hope you are enjoying the weather, whatever it is today. Thank you for the encouragement. Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
I honestly thought this was incredibly written. I could feel myself in each line of the poem. It was like playing a rewind of a documentary or movie.
You've written this cleanly and with precision!
Nicely done John
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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I honestly thought this was incredibly written. I could feel myself in each line of the poem. It was like playing a rewind of a documentary or movie.
You've written this cleanly and with precision!
Nicely done John
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Thank you for such an encouraging review and such generous comments, John. I really appreciate the six stars! Debi
