Comment from zanya

Excellent

The haunting and beautiful sight of the moon as it adorns our world - mysterious and enigmatic 'love wounds repair /sad memories left behind'.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Zanya thank you so much , great comment. Pili

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Luna light lulls the most savage of beasts, Pili. Her effulgent glow and spectral splendor has spawned tales and poetry of love and romance throughout the ages.

A wonderfully written Naani.

I wish you the best of luck in the contest.~Dean

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

You are so right... Thank you so much Dean. Smiles. Pili

reply by Dean Kuch on 14-Sep-2014

You're very welcome, Pili. :D

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

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Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Pili, just something about the moon that calms the night...consumes your every thought...calms your anger...and makes romantic feelings of love....lightens up the darkest nights(full moon)...memories beautiful...very well said...and very well written...Luff Linda xxoo love

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Beautiful comment my friend... Thank you soooooo much. Love. Pili

reply by l.raven on 14-Sep-2014

thank you...and you are so welcome...how are you feeling now???? I hope a bit stronger...xxoo love back

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Close home three days , elevator don't work....but no fever. Thank you sweetie. Pili

reply by l.raven on 14-Sep-2014

elevator bad news...fever good news...elevator can be fixed...fevers can be a pain...and led to something worse...but sorry you had to close home...takes three days to fix??? xxoo love

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Weekend.... Hug

reply by l.raven on 14-Sep-2014

YEAH!!! big hugs back...xxoo

reply by l.raven on 14-Sep-2014

thinking about it...next weekend...ouch...go on a vacation....it will go fast...time flies now...not like when we were kids...love ya

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Sweet... Smiles

reply by l.raven on 14-Sep-2014

smiling back at ya...xxoo

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

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Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

The moon has a powerful effect on everything, especially to human beings who are entranced by its light. Lovely picture to compliment your words, good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Thank you so much Faye , terrific review. Pili

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

The moon is many things and I love the way you portray her healing tendrils repairing the wounds of love. The picture has quite a haunting feeling to it and adds to the mystery of your verse. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Thank you W.J. For a terrific review. Pili

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Many poems have been written about the romantic energy of the moon. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Love your comment , thank you so much . Pili

reply by c_lucas on 14-Sep-2014

You;re welcome, Pili

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Exceptional

Very impressive poem and you accomplished something rare here. I love the abstract nature of this and the tone and mood you've created. The artwork is perfect. Maybe, I need to try one of these, but I am not good at them,
What a eerie picture, love it. Take care. Bruce.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Thank you so much my friend, great comment and six stars shining. Pili

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Not one wasted syllable. This sounds great. Each line says something different. I think, maybe you should leave off the S on 'repairs' and have it read as:

"love wounds repair
sad memories left behind"

Minor. Either way, it's awesome. Les

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

I battle with that, thank you , big help and comment. Pili

Comment from reconciled

Exceptional

"repaired"....Hi buttercup....-smile-...yes, there are sad memories left behind....but also irreplaceable treasured time spent. You don't look at them silver strands too long...you hear ne....love you michael

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Lol, I left repair... Thank you my friend, yepyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy love.. Pili

reply by reconciled on 14-Sep-2014

okay...then and an "s" to love...-wink-...so I can get some sleep...please....lol

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Lol.... You shall sleep like a baby

reply by reconciled on 14-Sep-2014

are you bringing warm milk and cookies....ewww goodie can't wait...-wink-

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Lol wait too early... How about Oreos ?

reply by reconciled on 14-Sep-2014

ahh.....-shouldershrug-...okay.............-wink-

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

LOL , cute...

Comment from Wendyanne

Exceptional

Hi Pili. It's a while since I read any of your beautiful poetry and this poem was a pleasure to read. Lovely imagery throughout,

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Oh Wendyanne , I don't write much... Love your comment and six stars, you humble me.... Pili