THIS is Overkill
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Comment from Acquired Taste
We lost our security quite a while ago - we have labored under the illusion of being safe by the rhetoric filling the airwaves - now, when a bit of clarity is revealed... we see the truth. And it is not pretty, nor comforting - nor are we safe. Just my thoughts. AT=/
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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We lost our security quite a while ago - we have labored under the illusion of being safe by the rhetoric filling the airwaves - now, when a bit of clarity is revealed... we see the truth. And it is not pretty, nor comforting - nor are we safe. Just my thoughts. AT=/
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Acquired Taste thank you for your review. Giovanni
Comment from OLA THOMAS
I love this poem, I love your thought on this theme, very relevant at this time. When protectors turned to destroyers, then there are questions to be asked. You scored your points.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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I love this poem, I love your thought on this theme, very relevant at this time. When protectors turned to destroyers, then there are questions to be asked. You scored your points.
ola thomas
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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OLA thank you for your review. Giovanni
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is really pretty good. Makes sense of how we really want our cake and eat it too. Thanks for sharing and making us aware.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This is really pretty good. Makes sense of how we really want our cake and eat it too. Thanks for sharing and making us aware.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Bobby Jo thank you for your review. Giovanni
Comment from steevie
your written is provocative and telling. You seem to know more about the world crisis in one poem, than do the majority of mankind put together.
Bravo on this enlightened verse!!
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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your written is provocative and telling. You seem to know more about the world crisis in one poem, than do the majority of mankind put together.
Bravo on this enlightened verse!!
smiles
steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Steevie thank you for your review. Giovanni
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you r welcome
steve
Comment from seaglass
This piece speaks truth and needed to be addressed years ago. We don't need a police state in this country. There are no policing of police, it seems.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This piece speaks truth and needed to be addressed years ago. We don't need a police state in this country. There are no policing of police, it seems.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Seaglass thank you for your review. Giovanni
Comment from lakeport
This is overkill. indeed that's a very hearfelt expressed story poem, very nice flow. thanks for sharing it, God bless you,Lakeport.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This is overkill. indeed that's a very hearfelt expressed story poem, very nice flow. thanks for sharing it, God bless you,Lakeport.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Lakeport thank you for your review. Giovanni
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your welcome.Lakeport.
Comment from Christine B.
Hello! What a haunting, consciousness-gripping, awesomely frank statement wrapped up in the powerful body of a poem! I cannot say any less. I like your no-nonsense style.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hello! What a haunting, consciousness-gripping, awesomely frank statement wrapped up in the powerful body of a poem! I cannot say any less. I like your no-nonsense style.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Christine B. I like your nicely written review. Thank you, Giovanni
Comment from amahra
This is a very nice Free Verse written very well. Loved the word choice and creative phrasing. Glad you saw no need for an art work. Words can be picturesque.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This is a very nice Free Verse written very well. Loved the word choice and creative phrasing. Glad you saw no need for an art work. Words can be picturesque.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Amahra thank you for your review. Giovanni
Comment from c_lucas
To put it mildly, all this religious fervor from so call followers is nothing but religious bulls__t. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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To put it mildly, all this religious fervor from so call followers is nothing but religious bulls__t. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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C_lucas thank you for your review. Giovanni
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You're are welcome, Giovanni. Charlie
Comment from Linda England Bonam
You sure nailed it with this one. I agree with every thing you said here. There is so much going on right now in this country and the only thing slipping away is all of our freedoms! I wish I would have reviewed this while I still had a six left!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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You sure nailed it with this one. I agree with every thing you said here. There is so much going on right now in this country and the only thing slipping away is all of our freedoms! I wish I would have reviewed this while I still had a six left!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you Linda for your review. Giovanni
