Road Meal
The crumbs are worth tre risk3 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
solid acrostic for Road Meal
good use of optional rhyming
vivid description of the birds swooping in with daring to obtain a meal of crumbs from the busy road
Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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solid acrostic for Road Meal
good use of optional rhyming
vivid description of the birds swooping in with daring to obtain a meal of crumbs from the busy road
Brooke
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Brooke for your encouraging review.
Comment from Domino 2
The picture reminds me of Hitchcock's 'Birds', Daphne.
I really like this one, expressing the determination and deftness of the feeding starlings - great fun that they defy the Highway Code.
Excellent.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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The picture reminds me of Hitchcock's 'Birds', Daphne.
I really like this one, expressing the determination and deftness of the feeding starlings - great fun that they defy the Highway Code.
Excellent.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Wow, Hitchcock's birds takes me back! Thanks, Ray, for a great review.
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No probs, Daphne.
Polly, my pet parrot, remembers all the dialogue from the movie and really gets on my nerves by keep repeating it. LOL.
Ray xx.
Comment from Eric1
Hi persevere, this is a wonderfully written acrostic poem for this competition entry my friend, Good alliteration, good description and imagery and great rhyming with a smooth flow, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Hi persevere, this is a wonderfully written acrostic poem for this competition entry my friend, Good alliteration, good description and imagery and great rhyming with a smooth flow, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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What an encouraging revue. Thank you Eric.
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You are very welcome my friend
