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Dear God Letter

a short letter to God

5 total reviews 
Comment from Judy Couch
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This is short and simple but it covers a lot in a few words. I like your mention of praying without ceasing. I can identify with the difficulty in doing that.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
    Thank you Judy:)
Comment from LoannaLois
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I think the brevity of this is beautifully written....and is really impactful.I love "I have only to whisper your name and you are there." That is just a calming thought.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
    Thank you:)
Comment from Carole Rosa
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To the author of "Dear God Letter", This is a lovely short prayer within a letter. You obviously wasn't blessed with the longwinded skill. Ha. Very nice piece. Carole

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
    Short, sweet and simple is my moto:) thanks so much!
Comment from solcates
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would be a great to have a book with short prayers to inspire us every day. Guess It should have another paragraph or two, because when we talk to God we must not forget to thank all he has given to us and all you have received , but I think that prayer should elevate and motivate I think it needs more spiritual fervor, serving the Lord is a work of constant learning, if you want to inspire your reader with this fervor you have to translate it to your writing.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
    Prayer does not need to wordy. Besides this was to be a letter to God, not necessarily a prayer but thank you for the review.
reply by solcates on 03-Sep-2014
    That is the beauty of reading, each person has a different vision. I gave my opinion as a reader, I like your prayer and believe that you wrote has the intention to inspire people and I believe that would be a great book to read every day.As a reader I saw this words as a prayer from the moment you invoke the name of God you are praying to God, A letter is one kind of prayer that reflects our most intimate desires.
Comment from Liisa
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Thank you for sharing your wise thought with us. You are so right, our minds are filled with many useless thoughts. Your letter is very personal ans sincere, it was nice to read it. Thanks.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
    Thank you.