Is anyone here a doctor?
Contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Well, I guess better late than never, eh? I'm very behind on reading and reviewing. You did a super job with this prompt, Snod. Your usual writing style comes through. Love the deep POV of your paramedic. Sounds like Zombie Airlines.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Well, I guess better late than never, eh? I'm very behind on reading and reviewing. You did a super job with this prompt, Snod. Your usual writing style comes through. Love the deep POV of your paramedic. Sounds like Zombie Airlines.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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No worries. I'm late in replyng to your late review on account of having been on my holidays. Thanks for your lovely review
Comment from Judy Couch
Wow! This is a terrific story. It's sort of a doomsday type. I hope you're planning to continue with it. I'd like to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Wow! This is a terrific story. It's sort of a doomsday type. I hope you're planning to continue with it. I'd like to see what happens next.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thanks. I may look at it later. Glad you liked it
Comment from Adri7enne
Dark, pretty horrifying, but so well described, snod. Kept me rivited all the way through. So, not rabies, but something that spread faster. Maybe that's what's wrong with the world, uh? LOL!
"I caught an image of a face contorted in rage before() I knocked him back and we fell to the ground..." Insert a space before (I).
Good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner to me!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Dark, pretty horrifying, but so well described, snod. Kept me rivited all the way through. So, not rabies, but something that spread faster. Maybe that's what's wrong with the world, uh? LOL!
"I caught an image of a face contorted in rage before() I knocked him back and we fell to the ground..." Insert a space before (I).
Good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner to me!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks. Governments have done zombie apocalypse scenarios, simply because of a possibility of a virulent pandemic suddenly taking place. Scarier than any fiction I could write
Comment from Nosha17
I probably shouldn't have read this, I am not too fond of horror, but I skipped the end! Well-written with quite a twist to the tale. Good use of descriptive language, good dialogue, interesting characters, strong story line. I wouldn't have liked to be on that plane. I liked your use of humour throughout, it adds to the attraction of the story. I spotted couple of errors, hope you don't mind, Para 2, line 2, having, Para 6, nodded and said.... Para 9, at a pinch. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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I probably shouldn't have read this, I am not too fond of horror, but I skipped the end! Well-written with quite a twist to the tale. Good use of descriptive language, good dialogue, interesting characters, strong story line. I wouldn't have liked to be on that plane. I liked your use of humour throughout, it adds to the attraction of the story. I spotted couple of errors, hope you don't mind, Para 2, line 2, having, Para 6, nodded and said.... Para 9, at a pinch. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Mind you pointing out the errors? I'm grateful for them, and for the review. Thanks
Comment from mikemagine
This rates a sixer! But I don't have any sixers on me. Zero flaws, plenty of action, plenty of control of the story, VERY believable! You might want to aim for publication if you haven't yet. With minimal effort, seems to me, you've transformed the mundane into something monstrous. You did so with much subtlety!!
Bravo!
Mike
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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This rates a sixer! But I don't have any sixers on me. Zero flaws, plenty of action, plenty of control of the story, VERY believable! You might want to aim for publication if you haven't yet. With minimal effort, seems to me, you've transformed the mundane into something monstrous. You did so with much subtlety!!
Bravo!
Mike
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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You're very kind, thank you
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My pleasure!!
