Vision and Sound: Their Stories
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Comment from madhatter1977
Hi Mikey, great introduction, it sounds intriguing and I didn't peg you as a Christian. The reincarnation is something I think could be true though who knows for sure, hey? Are sound and vision going to touch and smell each other in the story - that could be interesting! I've posted a follow up chapter to my story as well - thanks for reviewing - I will try to keep up with this as it sounds great ona a number of levels!! Best wishes, Pete :)
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Hi Mikey, great introduction, it sounds intriguing and I didn't peg you as a Christian. The reincarnation is something I think could be true though who knows for sure, hey? Are sound and vision going to touch and smell each other in the story - that could be interesting! I've posted a follow up chapter to my story as well - thanks for reviewing - I will try to keep up with this as it sounds great ona a number of levels!! Best wishes, Pete :)
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Sounds verrry interesting. I hope you won't steal my characters' names this time, though. LOL!
Lots of errors in the part where you speak of mistakes, almost as if it's a joke. :)
This is a first draft and there is going to be mistakes that is a certainty. I am learning, so hopefully there will be fewer mistakes than there was in my last piece.
Should say....
This is a first draft, and there ARE going to be mistakes; that is a certainty. I am learning, so hopefully there will be fewer mistakes than there WERE in my last piece.
I hope there are fewer than in those sentences. LOL! Just teasing, but "first draft" is no excuse when you're writing. No one should post a ROUGH draft, at least, so be sure to proofread each chapter carefully. Or I will get you! Muahahahahaaa.....
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Sounds verrry interesting. I hope you won't steal my characters' names this time, though. LOL!
Lots of errors in the part where you speak of mistakes, almost as if it's a joke. :)
This is a first draft and there is going to be mistakes that is a certainty. I am learning, so hopefully there will be fewer mistakes than there was in my last piece.
Should say....
This is a first draft, and there ARE going to be mistakes; that is a certainty. I am learning, so hopefully there will be fewer mistakes than there WERE in my last piece.
I hope there are fewer than in those sentences. LOL! Just teasing, but "first draft" is no excuse when you're writing. No one should post a ROUGH draft, at least, so be sure to proofread each chapter carefully. Or I will get you! Muahahahahaaa.....
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Actually, it is a rough draft. Hahaha. I went into create a book, and I did. I just typed all this into editor and posted it. Pretty good planning, huh? You don't have a character named Blaze do you? I haven't slept in 48 hours, so I'm a little dingy. Well, a little more dingy. I wasn't going to post this story probably ever, but Amanda asked me a question about reincarnation. So... sleep deprived me decided, I will just write this story then. mikey
