Reconciling With Dad
The Enjoyment of Eating-Contest Entry19 total reviews
Comment from maggieadams
Wow, this is so satirical, but oh, so healing, I can imagine...you appeal to all our senses (and to our sense of justice) and you do it in rhyme, how divine. One spag...evening's din(n)er. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow, this is so satirical, but oh, so healing, I can imagine...you appeal to all our senses (and to our sense of justice) and you do it in rhyme, how divine. One spag...evening's din(n)er. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from Judy Couch
It's well written and is probably a good way to blow off steam when you're mad at someone. Personnally I usually go to the garden, name the weeds after the person and then pull them. You did a good job with this.
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It's well written and is probably a good way to blow off steam when you're mad at someone. Personnally I usually go to the garden, name the weeds after the person and then pull them. You did a good job with this.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
I loved this. You get my last six for the week. I loved the prose interspersed among the poetry. It's just really clever, fun and finally something original! You'll be getting my vote. Good luck:)
teresa
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I loved this. You get my last six for the week. I loved the prose interspersed among the poetry. It's just really clever, fun and finally something original! You'll be getting my vote. Good luck:)
teresa
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from Linda Engel
Good symbolism, eating you past and pooping it out. Nice ttwisted story. Good choice of imagry letting audience know how you really feel with a smirk on your face. Good entry.
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Good symbolism, eating you past and pooping it out. Nice ttwisted story. Good choice of imagry letting audience know how you really feel with a smirk on your face. Good entry.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
An incredible piece of satire. Ha!!! A fantasy getting even for real or imagined transgressions. Cathartic either way. Works as a release for real abuse victims too. Should win easy. NG
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An incredible piece of satire. Ha!!! A fantasy getting even for real or imagined transgressions. Cathartic either way. Works as a release for real abuse victims too. Should win easy. NG
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from Eric1
This is a brilliantly constructed piece of prose/verse, it is also very hilarious,your verse is excellent as is the prose between each stanza, just one little glitch, did you mean to say, 'Nice to have you for dinner' at the end.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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This is a brilliantly constructed piece of prose/verse, it is also very hilarious,your verse is excellent as is the prose between each stanza, just one little glitch, did you mean to say, 'Nice to have you for dinner' at the end.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Wow. What a great review. I'm glad I'm up at this ridiculous hour to receive it!! Yes, I did mean "dinner". Good catch. I always get the two mixed up. Thanks for the catch and the review. Smiles.
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You are so welcome my friend
Comment from Acquired Taste
This is fabulous and I am out of 6s....a 5 is not nearly enough for this tongue-in-cheek tome - blowing off steam? I do understand your pain and would have no issue if this was a non-fiction story.
My best wishes for good luck in the contest. AT=/
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This is fabulous and I am out of 6s....a 5 is not nearly enough for this tongue-in-cheek tome - blowing off steam? I do understand your pain and would have no issue if this was a non-fiction story.
My best wishes for good luck in the contest. AT=/
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Yummy ... good to my tummy. Some yummy words here. Sorry, I don't like liver. I know people who eat squirrel brains -- I never did. Cannibalism... I don't think anyone else will have anything near this extreme! LOL! It is funny -- to me. This is sick -- lol! You got some sense of humor, Mikey boy!!!! Yep, I got a barrel of laughs out of this one. Hey, in the Phillipines they serve monkey brains. here is the kicker -- the poor money id alive with his head in the middle of the table. Cusomers take turns beating the monkey in the head with a hammer until it is dead. I never could do that, some of my buddies could. Banana show! Count your doubloon. do loco
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Yummy ... good to my tummy. Some yummy words here. Sorry, I don't like liver. I know people who eat squirrel brains -- I never did. Cannibalism... I don't think anyone else will have anything near this extreme! LOL! It is funny -- to me. This is sick -- lol! You got some sense of humor, Mikey boy!!!! Yep, I got a barrel of laughs out of this one. Hey, in the Phillipines they serve monkey brains. here is the kicker -- the poor money id alive with his head in the middle of the table. Cusomers take turns beating the monkey in the head with a hammer until it is dead. I never could do that, some of my buddies could. Banana show! Count your doubloon. do loco
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from Eigle Rull
Ha! I know quite a few girls that would love to do the same. My sisters for two. This poem was very well written. It did not give away the end until you got to the end. You used easy to read and understand words. It was interesting and it held my attention very well. I enjoyed reading it. It was excellent.
Always with respect,
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Ha! I know quite a few girls that would love to do the same. My sisters for two. This poem was very well written. It did not give away the end until you got to the end. You used easy to read and understand words. It was interesting and it held my attention very well. I enjoyed reading it. It was excellent.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
