Love Your Suit
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Comment from Tatarka2
How courageous you are to enter such a daunting challenge! And the result is in your own uniquely droll style, just on the edge of being offensive, but never somehow crossing that line. It's funny, it's evocative, and it's well-written in an alternative style that, along with the content, keeps the reader intrigued to the end. I don't see how you can not win this contest.
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How courageous you are to enter such a daunting challenge! And the result is in your own uniquely droll style, just on the edge of being offensive, but never somehow crossing that line. It's funny, it's evocative, and it's well-written in an alternative style that, along with the content, keeps the reader intrigued to the end. I don't see how you can not win this contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
Good cynical post, Mikey. Congrats on the win. Some notes to consider:
but, I always fall to the orb's spell -- But
Lobo smiled./A wolf sneaks up -- Changed tense.
"I'm seeing stars". -- Period inside quotations.
Once inside Baa Baa begins to cough -- Period.
Of course, It isn't about quality." -- it
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Good cynical post, Mikey. Congrats on the win. Some notes to consider:
but, I always fall to the orb's spell -- But
Lobo smiled./A wolf sneaks up -- Changed tense.
"I'm seeing stars". -- Period inside quotations.
Once inside Baa Baa begins to cough -- Period.
Of course, It isn't about quality." -- it
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from Spitfire
Congrats on the win. You're not the only entry to satirize the prompt contest, but this one has the base layout. I would add, it's not about quality, but popularity. Well, I'm working on a senryu to explain that. LOL
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Congrats on the win. You're not the only entry to satirize the prompt contest, but this one has the base layout. I would add, it's not about quality, but popularity. Well, I'm working on a senryu to explain that. LOL
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from Drew Delaney
You have a great imagination, Michael. I have noticed that many write in the contests or more so in prompts. I just don't know how everyone can keep up with whatever else they are doing. Like working on a novel, or such. And life and its cares.. anyway, this was different, and I liked it alot.
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You have a great imagination, Michael. I have noticed that many write in the contests or more so in prompts. I just don't know how everyone can keep up with whatever else they are doing. Like working on a novel, or such. And life and its cares.. anyway, this was different, and I liked it alot.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from Nosha17
I didn't know reviewers could get that vicious. All in good fun. I liked your entries, one crazy, the other more sublime. Good humour, use of descriptive language, rhyming and a fun read. Good luck in the contest. Faye
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I didn't know reviewers could get that vicious. All in good fun. I liked your entries, one crazy, the other more sublime. Good humour, use of descriptive language, rhyming and a fun read. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from seaglass
This is a very interesting poem of satire. Using the sheep to give the message is a good idea.I'm not a free verse poet so I usually pass rather than take a chance on missing the points I should be looking for. This all passes, in my book.
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This is a very interesting poem of satire. Using the sheep to give the message is a good idea.I'm not a free verse poet so I usually pass rather than take a chance on missing the points I should be looking for. This all passes, in my book.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the title. Each sheep is wearing a suit of wool. I like the winner that the wolf picked. He picked one that was like himself. The wolf liked lamb chops too. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the title. Each sheep is wearing a suit of wool. I like the winner that the wolf picked. He picked one that was like himself. The wolf liked lamb chops too. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Oh my. What an on the money satiric look at this site!! Yep, a bunch of sheep with a few predatory wolves in the mix. Who knows what little deals go on in the smokehouse!! :))
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Oh my. What an on the money satiric look at this site!! Yep, a bunch of sheep with a few predatory wolves in the mix. Who knows what little deals go on in the smokehouse!! :))
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Really good entries here. Kind of gory in the middle, but then you're a guy, and that's what they like to do. :) Sounds like you're copying Luke's style here and there. He'd be flattereed. LOL!
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Really good entries here. Kind of gory in the middle, but then you're a guy, and that's what they like to do. :) Sounds like you're copying Luke's style here and there. He'd be flattereed. LOL!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from Judy Couch
This is a good commentary on the relationship among animals. The preditors eat the others. I wonder what this says about Fanstory participants.
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This is a good commentary on the relationship among animals. The preditors eat the others. I wonder what this says about Fanstory participants.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
