He Paints The Sky
How Great Gd Is!3 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
Very nice spiritual poem with good rhyming and imagery. If we have faith God will always be there for us. I spotted one or two errors hope you don't mind. Above title-How great God is, next to last line, should be 'you'. Good luck in the contest. Faye
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Very nice spiritual poem with good rhyming and imagery. If we have faith God will always be there for us. I spotted one or two errors hope you don't mind. Above title-How great God is, next to last line, should be 'you'. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
Comment from adewpearl
You have misunderstood the rules for the 5/7/5 contest/form
The poem should be only 3 lines long
Line one should consist of 5 syllables
Line two should have 7 syllables
Line three should consist of 5 syllables
leave yu or go away - you
I like your message and declaration of appreciation in this thoughtful poem of faith
Brooke
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You have misunderstood the rules for the 5/7/5 contest/form
The poem should be only 3 lines long
Line one should consist of 5 syllables
Line two should have 7 syllables
Line three should consist of 5 syllables
leave yu or go away - you
I like your message and declaration of appreciation in this thoughtful poem of faith
Brooke
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
Comment from rjuselius
nice piece of poetic art concerning faith! god is everywhere but i don't quite understand his ways. is it karma or what that we are left to deal with for the rest of our lives?
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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nice piece of poetic art concerning faith! god is everywhere but i don't quite understand his ways. is it karma or what that we are left to deal with for the rest of our lives?
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
