Heart Country
Love of my land - Australia.26 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
Thank you for introducing me to your corner of creation -- at least as it was intended to be. Makes me long for the time when all is restored. I am reading this at my favorite time of the day -- just as the sun is peeking over the trees to brighten the day. God bless.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thank you for introducing me to your corner of creation -- at least as it was intended to be. Makes me long for the time when all is restored. I am reading this at my favorite time of the day -- just as the sun is peeking over the trees to brighten the day. God bless.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Jean, Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed a little of our culture. Yes, it will all come together once we pass through the darkness. Love, Kay.
Comment from DerivedBetter
Great poem, paints me a perfect picture of this beautiful land, which from your profile and name I'm going to assume is Australia. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Great poem, paints me a perfect picture of this beautiful land, which from your profile and name I'm going to assume is Australia. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much for reading - glad you enjoyed. You betcha, I am a proud Australian and as I mentioned, my grandmother was Aboriginal. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from CR Delport
No matter what happens in one's own country, it will often hold a special place in your heart, no matter where you find yourself. Thanks for sharing this well done poem.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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No matter what happens in one's own country, it will often hold a special place in your heart, no matter where you find yourself. Thanks for sharing this well done poem.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much for reading and yes, there's no place like home.
Comment from royowen
You write with all the passion of a lover, Australia is unique among all the lands of the earth, with all her her own flora and fauna, God has mas made every land peculiar to itself, you have written an articulate, well designed and composed poem. Kay, descriptively expressed in eloquent text, I enjoyed this nicely scribed poem, well done, Roy.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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You write with all the passion of a lover, Australia is unique among all the lands of the earth, with all her her own flora and fauna, God has mas made every land peculiar to itself, you have written an articulate, well designed and composed poem. Kay, descriptively expressed in eloquent text, I enjoyed this nicely scribed poem, well done, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much Roy. Glad you liked our poem. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Nosha17
Australia does have some beautiful birds and creatures, of the tropical kind-I have heard of some of them. Good descriptive language to describe the beauty of Nature and her goodness. How sad, that people don't appreciate enough and have to resort to destruction rather than enjoy their country. Enjoyable read. Faye
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Australia does have some beautiful birds and creatures, of the tropical kind-I have heard of some of them. Good descriptive language to describe the beauty of Nature and her goodness. How sad, that people don't appreciate enough and have to resort to destruction rather than enjoy their country. Enjoyable read. Faye
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thank you Faye - glad you enjoyed. :-)Kay XX
Comment from lalajovanoski
White ghost gums reach for azure skies Red earth - home to green bull-ants Witchetty grubs huddle in tree stumps Women dig for grubs and Kumara.
Land of my ancestors - heart country Willy-Willy dances for all to see Ancestors live in Gadawon trees Spirit of Yalunga sleeps soundly.
Oldest country on earth today No written language you will see Simple people - first land owners Children leave for big ci. ties. the lthe last the worrying and this come death are also used in the dream and I wish you the best of luck on the contest god bless you
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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White ghost gums reach for azure skies Red earth - home to green bull-ants Witchetty grubs huddle in tree stumps Women dig for grubs and Kumara.
Land of my ancestors - heart country Willy-Willy dances for all to see Ancestors live in Gadawon trees Spirit of Yalunga sleeps soundly.
Oldest country on earth today No written language you will see Simple people - first land owners Children leave for big ci. ties. the lthe last the worrying and this come death are also used in the dream and I wish you the best of luck on the contest god bless you
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thank you lalajovanoski. Nothing ever dies my friend. Blessings, Kay.
