Denglish for FanStory
Denglish #4. Seeking to shape English to save it19 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
You goof, really into those 2 and 3 stars...aren't ya???LOL...now behave yourself before Tom boots you off...LOL...this is great ...very well EXPRESSED...and a great write...sorry I don't have a six or a ten for you...LOL...Love ya Linda xxoo luff
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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You goof, really into those 2 and 3 stars...aren't ya???LOL...now behave yourself before Tom boots you off...LOL...this is great ...very well EXPRESSED...and a great write...sorry I don't have a six or a ten for you...LOL...Love ya Linda xxoo luff
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Thank you sweet dreamer...you must have awakened...as you were going to bed a little while ago...my gain! :) Dennis
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I wasn't going...I told you to go....LOL...your so cut...LOL
Comment from GE Parson
My good Friend & Brother,
You have too much time on your hands to be able to think about all these great words. Yah just too much time!
I just had a brilliant thought (But of cause all my thought are brilliant I must humbly admit) Lets you and "humble" Jerry put our great above normal brains together and publish a new Dict-konary with brand new,never-heard-of words.
I'll start it off with a new never-heard of- word:
Uh now I'm making no sense at all ' if I have never heard
of the word before how can I write one? Duuuuuu
I gpts tu go,
Have a good Sonday
Jerry -
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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My good Friend & Brother,
You have too much time on your hands to be able to think about all these great words. Yah just too much time!
I just had a brilliant thought (But of cause all my thought are brilliant I must humbly admit) Lets you and "humble" Jerry put our great above normal brains together and publish a new Dict-konary with brand new,never-heard-of words.
I'll start it off with a new never-heard of- word:
Uh now I'm making no sense at all ' if I have never heard
of the word before how can I write one? Duuuuuu
I gpts tu go,
Have a good Sonday
Jerry -
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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You may be right about too much time on my hands...but I probably would have written anyway. Hope it gave you a chuckle..God bless, Dennis
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Yepper It gave me a chuckle....I hope you pickd up on my attempt of humor by givin you a "1" rating. It was worth a 5 if not higher.
May yu have a blessed SONday,
B rother Jerry
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Totally missed it...but it's okay since I'm sure you have over rated some of my stuff in the past. :) Dennis
Comment from Twilightspire
Heh heh. This was an interesting little piece. I can see quite a few of our fellow Fanstorians in this. Is that wrong?
Overall, you did a great job with its intention, making us chuckle at the oft times ironic realism of FS.
Great job and no, I did not find any Spag ... what does that make me, exactly?
-T.J.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Heh heh. This was an interesting little piece. I can see quite a few of our fellow Fanstorians in this. Is that wrong?
Overall, you did a great job with its intention, making us chuckle at the oft times ironic realism of FS.
Great job and no, I did not find any Spag ... what does that make me, exactly?
-T.J.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Blind? or kind...:) Thanks!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
I enjoyed reading this series of new words for fanstory. I hope I will never be a spagowitch. it might make me pull a stitch. I like to be fair and balanced like Fox News and never give anybody Reviewer Blues.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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I enjoyed reading this series of new words for fanstory. I hope I will never be a spagowitch. it might make me pull a stitch. I like to be fair and balanced like Fox News and never give anybody Reviewer Blues.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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I think it's time you went to prose because your fixation on rhyme has gotten more evident with time. You maybe a innarutreviewer? LOL Thanks for reading, Dennis
Comment from JennaG
Thank you for a much needed chuckle today! I love these lessons in Denglish. They are so clever. I can't even pick a favorite term because they're all superb. What about one for the reviewer who is a brand new standard member, hasn't posted any work of their own, but proceeds to give you a 3 or 4 rating, and then says they love your work and offer no suggestions for help? Those drive me crazy! Anyway, this is very well written and that picture cracks me up every time I see it. Thanks again for brightening my day. :)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Thank you for a much needed chuckle today! I love these lessons in Denglish. They are so clever. I can't even pick a favorite term because they're all superb. What about one for the reviewer who is a brand new standard member, hasn't posted any work of their own, but proceeds to give you a 3 or 4 rating, and then says they love your work and offer no suggestions for help? Those drive me crazy! Anyway, this is very well written and that picture cracks me up every time I see it. Thanks again for brightening my day. :)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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"What about one for the reviewer who is a brand new standard member, hasn't posted any work of their own, but proceeds to give you a 3 or 4 rating, and then says they love your work and offer no suggestions for help?" I swear this has to be the same one I've been getting recently! How about Presumptuousreviewernonwriterous? Glad you like it and thanks for reading and commenting. Dennis
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That's perfect! I love it! :)
Comment from MissMerri
A most entertaining piece, clever and creative, and sure to make us laugh as we see some of our own reviewers described in your "Denglish." I wonder what you might call the reviewer whose reviews sound almost exactly the same no matter what or who the recipient is... Paste and repaste reviewer? LOL. Whatever works, I guess. Thank you for the laugh, and for once again posting a piece that is carefully crafted and edited so that all the reader has to do is enjoy it. It was a pleasure.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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A most entertaining piece, clever and creative, and sure to make us laugh as we see some of our own reviewers described in your "Denglish." I wonder what you might call the reviewer whose reviews sound almost exactly the same no matter what or who the recipient is... Paste and repaste reviewer? LOL. Whatever works, I guess. Thank you for the laugh, and for once again posting a piece that is carefully crafted and edited so that all the reader has to do is enjoy it. It was a pleasure.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Thanks, Miss Merri, that sounds like a good one too. HastyPastyreviewer? :) Dennis Glad it gave you a laugh!
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Yes!! That's a perfect name... "HastyPastyreviewer. I love it! You are so clever!
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:)You always bring out the best in people...
Comment from gypsycaravan
Dear Maturorelalviewer, This piece of literature is definitely a classic. Do you care if I send these new word creations to Mr. Webster to add to his collection? I do have one more word to add as I find its use would be invaluable on many occasions. How about POOPOUSVIEWER when all you can really say about the writing is it reads like a bunch of bull-----. Had an instructor in Psychology 101 who used his red "BULL Shit" rubber stamp on too many of my lengthy essay question replies. Nice work, Deniz22.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Dear Maturorelalviewer, This piece of literature is definitely a classic. Do you care if I send these new word creations to Mr. Webster to add to his collection? I do have one more word to add as I find its use would be invaluable on many occasions. How about POOPOUSVIEWER when all you can really say about the writing is it reads like a bunch of bull-----. Had an instructor in Psychology 101 who used his red "BULL Shit" rubber stamp on too many of my lengthy essay question replies. Nice work, Deniz22.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Hmmm, maybe we should get a bunch of red stamps with the new words on them? :) Thanks for reviewing and commenting...so glad you liked it1 Dennis
Comment from Eric1
Hi Deniz, this is an inspirational piece of writing my friend, I promise that I did read and savour every word, problem is, most of em apply to me, loved the piece about how you rescued that cat by the way, oh well must go.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Hi Deniz, this is an inspirational piece of writing my friend, I promise that I did read and savour every word, problem is, most of em apply to me, loved the piece about how you rescued that cat by the way, oh well must go.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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ummm, "rescued the cat"? I think I have a name for you...but I won't use it since you are obviously kidding...you are kidding...right? Thanks for reading and commenting. Dennis
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You are very welcome my friend, and yes Deniz, I was joking, great write though!
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I like the words you have chosen... oh I see, you chose the ones you made up.. LOL . I wish I had thought of some of those. You know, seriously, I have been on the site almost 2 years and I've only received a few reviews that were, in my opinion, inappropriate. Bravo, for your essay, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
:-) Carolyn
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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I like the words you have chosen... oh I see, you chose the ones you made up.. LOL . I wish I had thought of some of those. You know, seriously, I have been on the site almost 2 years and I've only received a few reviews that were, in my opinion, inappropriate. Bravo, for your essay, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
:-) Carolyn
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Thank you, glad you liked it. Most of my inappropriate reviews were received in my first few months before I understood how FS works. I'm sure I've been guilty of many of these same infractions. Overall, it's a great site that actually works for writers on all levels. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Dennis
