Comment from amada

Excellent

Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a fun and clean take in the differences on males and females. My fave "Women enjoy pampering spas and fun malls
While men watch sports and scratch their balls..."

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Lol I'm so glad you like it!! Thank you so much for the great comment and rating. It's so very much appreciated....xoxo

Comment from JeanneHP

Excellent

Congratulations! Loved your poem and voted for it, which resulted in mine losing by one. That is so funny, even made my husband laugh. Great poem. :-) Jeanne

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thank you so very much but I'm sad you lost!! I'm so very grateful....xoxo

Comment from joann r romei

Exceptional

Very cute, but i do not agree with the american dream part , we are different and the problem is we are expected to understand eachother at all times, complicated.,

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thank you sooo very much!! You made me entire day....xoxo

Comment from kukarad70

Exceptional

Dear Heidixoxo
Excellent writing on difference between men and women. Congratulations for winning contest! How sweetly you have explained the difference in rhyming form as a poem. Simple and selecting words in your touches heart. I have seen brilliancy in your creativity and best of luck for your more win in coming days. Thanks and regards. Kamal

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Wow...thank you so very much my friend! I'm truly honored xoxo

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I like the back and forth repartee between man and woman who realize it takes two to make a marriage. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you so very much

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

This was a fun read, ending on a great tone. Different is what makes the sexes engaging.

Good job. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks so much Jax

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This is a fun poem about some serotype differences, even though we all know that there are many exceptions. What I like about it is the conclusion that the differences makes us balanced and none of us want it to change

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you so much

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you so much

Comment from JM

Excellent

This is a fun poem to read. I agree with you on every point you so cleverly put to rhyme. I like the way you wrapped up your write with the last stanza. My favorite line is "... I sit to pee, you stand to splash" because when I read the prompt that was the first thought that came to my mind. Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you so very much!!

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Ha ha! Well said, Mystery Poet, and all so very true, I have to admit.

The rhyming was excellent, and you certainly have highlighted many of the glaring differences between men, and the fairer sex.

Great job, I laughed nearly all the way through!

I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.:}~Dean

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you Desn!!

Comment from GeraldS

Excellent

I especially like your first and fourth stanzas. But, I couldn't help noticing that you categorized this piece as "General Fiction." Was that a Freudian slip maybe? In any event, I think you redeemed yourself with your last stanza! Good entry!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you Gerald!!