From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Infinity"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Jacqueline1616
WOnderful! I'm so glad to be reading your stuff again. You're always and inspiration. I just love the "typical" of a writer. (You meet God and you want so much to have a pen and write it all down. In every language. How brilliantly intuitive of you). Keep the inspiration coming.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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WOnderful! I'm so glad to be reading your stuff again. You're always and inspiration. I just love the "typical" of a writer. (You meet God and you want so much to have a pen and write it all down. In every language. How brilliantly intuitive of you). Keep the inspiration coming.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Wow Jacqueline: so wonderful to hear from you again!! Thank you so very much for this encouraging and uplifting review. Stay tuned!! Vance
Comment from Laurie's Legacy
definitely a free verse and a mind dump... Urgency from nowhere? Are you sick or just thinking about where we will all wind up someday? Of course, we won't all have the privilege of time... The picture complements your words quite nicely. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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definitely a free verse and a mind dump... Urgency from nowhere? Are you sick or just thinking about where we will all wind up someday? Of course, we won't all have the privilege of time... The picture complements your words quite nicely. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Hi Laurie's Legacy: Thanks so much for reviewing my work and to answer your questions...not sick....just thinking about tomorrow where indeed the privilege of time is only NOW! All the best! HIS GRAYNESS
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You are most certainly welcome and I'm glad you're not sick? Just pondering the future?
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Nice prose about spiritual values. "God is light" goes right back to Dante's seven rings of heaven. This prose fits right in with that idea....Great job!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Nice prose about spiritual values. "God is light" goes right back to Dante's seven rings of heaven. This prose fits right in with that idea....Great job!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Dear Raphael Montonaro: nice to hear from you and thanks so much for your kind review. I hope to see you again soon!
HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Darkhorse555
oh reading these words to find my way to the brilliantly glowing gate now that would be all prayers answered for sure beautifully written piece dear friend god bless
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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oh reading these words to find my way to the brilliantly glowing gate now that would be all prayers answered for sure beautifully written piece dear friend god bless
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Dear Darkhorse....thanks so much for this review and catching the vision! I hope you don't see that gate for a while anyway dear friend!! All the very best and blessings to you! Vance
Comment from Irish Rain
Beyond exceptional, you have just written my belief of the death experience, I especially loved that radiant ink, dissolving into infinity! Beautiful! Blessings...Judy
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Beyond exceptional, you have just written my belief of the death experience, I especially loved that radiant ink, dissolving into infinity! Beautiful! Blessings...Judy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Dear Judy: thank you sooooo very much for this lovely review and six stars! I'm so glad you related to this and Blessings to you in return! All the very best! Vance
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You are always soooooo welcome!!!!!!
Comment from robina1978
If I look closely, I see it is poetry: just read it out loud. You have to write is the main message. Also your destiny and about God.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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If I look closely, I see it is poetry: just read it out loud. You have to write is the main message. Also your destiny and about God.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thanks robina...always nice to hear from you..Vance
Comment from lakeport
Infinity, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem, very nice flow. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. lakeport....
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Infinity, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem, very nice flow. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. lakeport....
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thanks lakeport for this kind review....much appreciated! Vance
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your welcome,lakeport.
Comment from GE Parson
Brother Vance,
I know what you are saying...I think. You ae talking about leaving this earthly body behind and all it's temperary riches for othrs to fight over, and yourself faster than a thought, kneel down befoe our Savior.
Great free verse, my Brother,
Your Friend,
Jerry
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Brother Vance,
I know what you are saying...I think. You ae talking about leaving this earthly body behind and all it's temperary riches for othrs to fight over, and yourself faster than a thought, kneel down befoe our Savior.
Great free verse, my Brother,
Your Friend,
Jerry
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Dear Jerry: thanks so much for your encouraging and thoughtful review...also the very generous six stars! Blessings to you my friend! Vance
Comment from Kingsland
Shake hands with love and you'll have shaken hands with god. This is a very interesting piece of poetic art. I think it would read better in Short lines instead of in a paragraph. But that is just my opinion. This is a five star piece of poetry all the way... John
Ps... You write the first word after an ellipse with a capitol letter...
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Shake hands with love and you'll have shaken hands with god. This is a very interesting piece of poetic art. I think it would read better in Short lines instead of in a paragraph. But that is just my opinion. This is a five star piece of poetry all the way... John
Ps... You write the first word after an ellipse with a capitol letter...
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thanks John for your thoughtful review. I had several reviews that suggested I break this up into short paragraphs and several reviews that commented on the fact that I did not break it up but instead "dumped" it all in one single burst. I called this my "mind dump" and decided not to put it into bite sized thought but rather, exactly as it flowed. I appreciate your comments and thank you for your meaningful review. His Grayness: Vance
Comment from Dean Kuch
This was so well done, Vance, that my only regret after having read it is that I don not have any six star ratings left to share with you for it. That being said, you take us on an elemental and insightful journey through the mind here, and you ask a pertinent and age old question asked by so many others who have come before you. Why am I here, what is my ultimate purpose in life? While some seek such answers and never receive them, others thrive and cherish their God given abilities to do what it is they do well...whatever that may be.
This is deep, Vance, deep and meaningful. I truly enjoyed reading it!~Dean
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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This was so well done, Vance, that my only regret after having read it is that I don not have any six star ratings left to share with you for it. That being said, you take us on an elemental and insightful journey through the mind here, and you ask a pertinent and age old question asked by so many others who have come before you. Why am I here, what is my ultimate purpose in life? While some seek such answers and never receive them, others thrive and cherish their God given abilities to do what it is they do well...whatever that may be.
This is deep, Vance, deep and meaningful. I truly enjoyed reading it!~Dean
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Dean: thank you sincerely for this wonderful review and virtual six stars. It is always an honor to hear from you and your insight is very valuable to me. Very best regards, Vance
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The pleasure was all mine entirely, Vance. :}
Have yourself a wonderful week, my friend!~Dean
