A Dapper Crow of Blackest Coat
My time's run out...108 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Hi Dean, I'm reading this one in broad day light (not my usual midnight review) and thoroughly enjoyed the flight, creepy pictures and all. I loved the presentation with the bold wording and structure. Thank you too for the history lesson. I always learn something new from your poem or your notes or both. Well done, my friend.
Blessings
Janet
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Hi Dean, I'm reading this one in broad day light (not my usual midnight review) and thoroughly enjoyed the flight, creepy pictures and all. I loved the presentation with the bold wording and structure. Thank you too for the history lesson. I always learn something new from your poem or your notes or both. Well done, my friend.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
Comment from mikemagine
Supernatural poetry that's a very fine salute to Poe.
Love the Dove! Throw the Crow...a bone of bar-bed steel!! Let the arrow pierce his larynx or rip his heart that's barren.
Yes, fear - that is what empowers messengers of Evil!
Very well done!
Mike
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Supernatural poetry that's a very fine salute to Poe.
Love the Dove! Throw the Crow...a bone of bar-bed steel!! Let the arrow pierce his larynx or rip his heart that's barren.
Yes, fear - that is what empowers messengers of Evil!
Very well done!
Mike
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Thanks, Mike, and it always flattering to hear Poe's hallowed named in response to something I've written. I truly appreciate your complimentary review.
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It was quite a treat to read your story, Dean. Writers such as you motivate me!
Mike
Comment from robina1978
Excellent picture to complement your beautiful poem. I did not know that ravens are associated with death. I really enjoyed your poem and all the internal rhyme.
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Excellent picture to complement your beautiful poem. I did not know that ravens are associated with death. I really enjoyed your poem and all the internal rhyme.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
Comment from livelylinda
Dean: beautifully written. As I was reading, I kept hearing Poe's raven quoting, "Never more". I believe that with this one, you have definitely reached the level of Poe, but within your own style. Don't forget to breathe, Linda
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Dean: beautifully written. As I was reading, I kept hearing Poe's raven quoting, "Never more". I believe that with this one, you have definitely reached the level of Poe, but within your own style. Don't forget to breathe, Linda
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
Comment from DR DIP
FAAAAAAAAAAARK FAAAAAAAAAARK!..I love this I really got into the rhythm of this whole piece then when I got down to the image and the bloody crow turned and looked at me..I fkg shit my self!! lol
you ARE the master poet and producer extraordinaire.
you never cease to amaze.
thanks for scaring and sharing!
as always, dip
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FAAAAAAAAAAARK FAAAAAAAAAARK!..I love this I really got into the rhythm of this whole piece then when I got down to the image and the bloody crow turned and looked at me..I fkg shit my self!! lol
you ARE the master poet and producer extraordinaire.
you never cease to amaze.
thanks for scaring and sharing!
as always, dip
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
NICE POEM. I LOVED THE IMAGES A LOT. I DON'T KNOW HOW TO ADD MORE THAN ONE IMAGE. DOES ONE KEEP BROWSING TILL ONE GETS ALL OF THEM AND THEN UPLOAD? HOW DOES ONE DETERMINE THE ARRANGEMENT OF THE PICTURES WITHIN THE POEM?
GREAT JOB! AND YOU ARE RIGHT.BIRDS ARE INSINUATED IN A LOT OF CULTURES TO EITHER SING A DEATH SONG WHICH COULD SERVE AS A PREMONITION OR TAKE THE DEAD SOUL FAR AWAY.I ADMIRE YOUR COURAGE IN PERSONALIZING THIS POEM.
WELL DONE!
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NICE POEM. I LOVED THE IMAGES A LOT. I DON'T KNOW HOW TO ADD MORE THAN ONE IMAGE. DOES ONE KEEP BROWSING TILL ONE GETS ALL OF THEM AND THEN UPLOAD? HOW DOES ONE DETERMINE THE ARRANGEMENT OF THE PICTURES WITHIN THE POEM?
GREAT JOB! AND YOU ARE RIGHT.BIRDS ARE INSINUATED IN A LOT OF CULTURES TO EITHER SING A DEATH SONG WHICH COULD SERVE AS A PREMONITION OR TAKE THE DEAD SOUL FAR AWAY.I ADMIRE YOUR COURAGE IN PERSONALIZING THIS POEM.
WELL DONE!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
Comment from michaelcahill
I keep seeing this as I scurry around trying to catch up!! I had to peek. Wow. Just wonderful. To enhance something, there has to be something there to enhance and there is the most beautifully written poem that grips right away and doesn't let go. Yes, simple words on a page would be killer as well, but don't they put Van Goghs in cool frames with spotlights on them? Awesome presentation and piece. mikey
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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I keep seeing this as I scurry around trying to catch up!! I had to peek. Wow. Just wonderful. To enhance something, there has to be something there to enhance and there is the most beautifully written poem that grips right away and doesn't let go. Yes, simple words on a page would be killer as well, but don't they put Van Goghs in cool frames with spotlights on them? Awesome presentation and piece. mikey
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Great point, Mikey, about Van Goghs I mean. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, buddy! I appreciate you dropping in to give me your thoughts on it.
~Deano
Comment from faragon
I really love this poem for some unknown reason. I like the way you have placed the verses and the way it flows together. It is almost as if it is a poem within a poem. Great work!
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I really love this poem for some unknown reason. I like the way you have placed the verses and the way it flows together. It is almost as if it is a poem within a poem. Great work!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
Comment from LIJ Red
The crow is one of the smartest, toughest, most destructive and aggravating birds. Lived around them always-they are remarkable, but supernatural? Nah. Excellent poem.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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The crow is one of the smartest, toughest, most destructive and aggravating birds. Lived around them always-they are remarkable, but supernatural? Nah. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Thanks, LIJ Red. I appreciate you dropping in to give me your opinions on it. Much obliged!~Dean
Comment from Tomes Johnston
I was glad that I read the notes. I thought that there was a hint of Edgar Allen Poe in this poem. It has touches of the raven written all over it. This is also a well -crafted piece and one Tha is full of imagery.
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I was glad that I read the notes. I thought that there was a hint of Edgar Allen Poe in this poem. It has touches of the raven written all over it. This is also a well -crafted piece and one Tha is full of imagery.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
