Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Jackarrie
A very sad reality, so beautifully written, why do our young have to die in these bloody wars. war is hell
everyone is the enemy if wars did not exist we would enjoy eternal peace a utopia an end to all human suffering.
a deserved six, Mary
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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A very sad reality, so beautifully written, why do our young have to die in these bloody wars. war is hell
everyone is the enemy if wars did not exist we would enjoy eternal peace a utopia an end to all human suffering.
a deserved six, Mary
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you Mary for the review and the six
Gary
Comment from tfawcus
It takes a poet to remind us of the horror of this war to end all wars. My father was in the trenches, then in the Royal Fling Corps - out of the frying pan into the fire. Miraculously he survived, but in many ways was a partially closed book afterwards. Your lines are penned with feeling.
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It takes a poet to remind us of the horror of this war to end all wars. My father was in the trenches, then in the Royal Fling Corps - out of the frying pan into the fire. Miraculously he survived, but in many ways was a partially closed book afterwards. Your lines are penned with feeling.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you tfawcus
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi!
Good to "meet" you.
It's never easy to fabricate any sort of written essay about war and convey the magnitude of anguish and destruction it forces upon its victims. But you have done so, and in a relatively gentle way. Your poem was provocative and poignant. I spent 2 years in Vietnam but was fortunate to come back still put together, both physically and mentally.
Your work touched me. I feel for our young men and women in the Mid East. It's just a modern day Vietnam, in my eyes.
Nicely done ...
Alan
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Hi!
Good to "meet" you.
It's never easy to fabricate any sort of written essay about war and convey the magnitude of anguish and destruction it forces upon its victims. But you have done so, and in a relatively gentle way. Your poem was provocative and poignant. I spent 2 years in Vietnam but was fortunate to come back still put together, both physically and mentally.
Your work touched me. I feel for our young men and women in the Mid East. It's just a modern day Vietnam, in my eyes.
Nicely done ...
Alan
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you Alan was in the British army in the late 60s myself but thank you for your review
Gary
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Hi Gary,
Nice to "meet" you. You are welcome. And thank you for your service to your country.
Alan
Comment from Ben Colder
We here in America at one time would never let the memories of our fallen ever pass with out a Poppy drive. Today I see none on the streets offered for such. What a shame. Thank you for this tribute. Well done. Blessings
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We here in America at one time would never let the memories of our fallen ever pass with out a Poppy drive. Today I see none on the streets offered for such. What a shame. Thank you for this tribute. Well done. Blessings
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you Ben
Comment from Teri7
This is a true six star poem you have penned. It touches deep in the soul. You used very good wording and great imagery. I love the artwork you chose. Hugs, Teri
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This is a true six star poem you have penned. It touches deep in the soul. You used very good wording and great imagery. I love the artwork you chose. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this review and six Teri
Gary
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your welcome Gary
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
We've lost too many people to war and violence. I wish everything could be solved with chocolate and coffee. When will people learn that just because you believe something different than I or love the same sex or what have you, in the end we're all the same. There is nothing different between us. We're all the same inside and war, we like to think it solves things, but does it really?
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We've lost too many people to war and violence. I wish everything could be solved with chocolate and coffee. When will people learn that just because you believe something different than I or love the same sex or what have you, in the end we're all the same. There is nothing different between us. We're all the same inside and war, we like to think it solves things, but does it really?
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
I LIKE THE IDEA OF BLOOD COLORING THE FIELDS RED.IT GOES WELL WITH THE IMAGERY. IT IS GOOD TO REMEMBER THE THOUSANDS OF MEN AND WOMEN WHO LAY THEIR LIVES DOWN FOR THEIR COUNTRIES IN WAR SITUATIONS. IDEALLY WE SHOULD NEVER FORGET. LOVELY POEM!
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I LIKE THE IDEA OF BLOOD COLORING THE FIELDS RED.IT GOES WELL WITH THE IMAGERY. IT IS GOOD TO REMEMBER THE THOUSANDS OF MEN AND WOMEN WHO LAY THEIR LIVES DOWN FOR THEIR COUNTRIES IN WAR SITUATIONS. IDEALLY WE SHOULD NEVER FORGET. LOVELY POEM!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this review
Gary
Comment from royowen
The First World War was particularly brutal with many thousands being buried on foreign soil! The interesting thing was they all thought that God was on there side! Beautifully written tribute to fallen soldier, eloquent and well expressed! Well done. Blessings, Roy.
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The First World War was particularly brutal with many thousands being buried on foreign soil! The interesting thing was they all thought that God was on there side! Beautifully written tribute to fallen soldier, eloquent and well expressed! Well done. Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this review Roy
Gary
Comment from GWinterwin
A sad story in this poem, good word flow to tell of the hurt and dying. The grief and torment from the spilled blood of the people.
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A sad story in this poem, good word flow to tell of the hurt and dying. The grief and torment from the spilled blood of the people.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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Thanks GW for your review
Comment from Sonaleeka
Hey buddy ,You are really one of the poet whose writing I really enjoyed.This is a great one.Keep amazed us with your flawless work.Worth reading.
God bless!
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Hey buddy ,You are really one of the poet whose writing I really enjoyed.This is a great one.Keep amazed us with your flawless work.Worth reading.
God bless!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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well thank you for this review
Gary
