Comment from Rosalyne

Excellent

Hi, Bill.
This is a clever script, witty and humourous. Great contrast between the Dad and Lad, who really has his step father under his control. The math equation using the plus and minus of the wives is well done.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014

Thank you, Rosalyne, for the excellent review.

Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

too cute. Be careful what you wish for. The whole time he was planning to get rid of his step-son, he was the one to die. What is it they say about Karma? I think it applies here.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014

Thank you, Linda, for reviewing this. I thought I'd toss a one scene play in to clear out some unused sarcasm.

reply by lindalcreel on 12-Aug-2014

I like sarcasm. LOL

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

One bad Dad to the bone
Clearly his mind is blown
Apparently his life as well
as it goes in this sad tale
Lad is still looking
as he continues hooking
others to do his work

Too much like real life for some, Buck

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014

Thanks, Buck, for checking this one out.

reply by Trybuck on 12-Aug-2014

you're very welcome

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

This is cleverly done, Bill! Is there such a thing as flash scripts.

Is there a cheat sheet for this math problems. [either THIS math PROBLEM or THESE math PROBLEMS.

Good job!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014

Thanks, Jay, for noting these error. ((chuckle)