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Comment from kiwijenny
By Krikey you likey.......Mikey I must examine his sitey....
This is a bit of a crazy review but I like this poem by you
Well done ....................................................
God bless
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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By Krikey you likey.......Mikey I must examine his sitey....
This is a bit of a crazy review but I like this poem by you
Well done ....................................................
God bless
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the lovely review. Look for Michael Cahill or michaelcahill's profile someone could not find him as it won't show under MIkey that is his Nickname he probably had before we even knew him. Lovely bloke. Second verse is coming now I know how Cahill is pronounced "up Over" we do it different "Down Under"
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.
Comment from adewpearl
good rhyming in limerick format
I like the way you make like rhyme with kriky and Mikey by making it likey - good word play and humor
a very nice tribute to a helpful friend/reviewer :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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good rhyming in limerick format
I like the way you make like rhyme with kriky and Mikey by making it likey - good word play and humor
a very nice tribute to a helpful friend/reviewer :-) Brooke
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke nice to have a handle can't remember if I knew that before. Appreciate the review stick around now I have the pronunciation of his last name sorted (We say it different Down Under") I plan to add a second verse SOON! Cheers, Geoff.
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Comment from royowen
I'm not sure what the suggestions suggestions were Geoff, but if you think they're ok, then I'm with you, but pride like your rhyming roping, groping, coping, stoking, poking, stroking, that's all Geoff, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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I'm not sure what the suggestions suggestions were Geoff, but if you think they're ok, then I'm with you, but pride like your rhyming roping, groping, coping, stoking, poking, stroking, that's all Geoff, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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If you read what Mikey wrote about the reviewing system here on FS he makes some good points about rewards being level with the amount of work it takes to review stuff. I can't remember if you only wirte poems or you have written some stories as well I think you have. But there are some really short poems that sometimers give great big rewards for reviewing compared to big stories that only igve small rewards. I love reading a good story regardless of the reward but Mikey's point is valid. Look for Michael Cahill's Profile he is after all also a bro in the Lord mate.
Thanks for the review God Bless.
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Reasonably happy with the system, take the good with the Bad might take a look! Roy
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Comment from Dean Kuch
Ha ha, good stuff, Sankey. Yeah, I read his post on reviewing poetry vs. prose too, and he does make some very good points.
I think he'll really like this one!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Ha ha, good stuff, Sankey. Yeah, I read his post on reviewing poetry vs. prose too, and he does make some very good points.
I think he'll really like this one!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Hi Dean yes he does. Thanks for the great review. I really do agree Tom needs to take some of this on board as although I don't mind reading a story if it is of interest to me regardless of rewards it would bode well for the scoring system to be re-worked so that more reviewing work is rewarded comensurably if there is such a word.
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I agree with you 100%, Sankey. I can write a story, promote it to i.25, and I am lucky if I get nine reviews in two days time. I can write a poem, promote it to the same level and receive 50+. So, where is the incentive to write stories, other than to move up in the rankings? The is none.
Prose is far more difficult to write, I feel. I can write poetry all day long.
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SOme good points there mate.
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Comment from seaglass
I like this, it really flows smoothly and who wouldn't likey Mikey? He's a kindred spirit on so many levels, a truly kind, gentle soul.
I must say miss his long stories now that he's totally focused on his poetry group
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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I like this, it really flows smoothly and who wouldn't likey Mikey? He's a kindred spirit on so many levels, a truly kind, gentle soul.
I must say miss his long stories now that he's totally focused on his poetry group
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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ha thanks mate I missed this review saw the Big Six post before I read this thanks for the wonderful review of a poem about a wonderful bloke. More coming by the way as I said before.
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Comment from Eternal Muse
lol. I loved this Limerick! It's witty, sharp and crisp, and you have the flection which is hard to do in a Limerick, and few do right.
I almost laughed out loud when I read:
And Mikey's are best here
By Krikey!
Yes, many of us have suggestions for improvement of this site - some have worded them, some haven't.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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lol. I loved this Limerick! It's witty, sharp and crisp, and you have the flection which is hard to do in a Limerick, and few do right.
I almost laughed out loud when I read:
And Mikey's are best here
By Krikey!
Yes, many of us have suggestions for improvement of this site - some have worded them, some haven't.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Well I plan to visit the Forum and see what sort of spanner I can throw in the works over there too another verse is coming now I know how Cahill is pronounced up over...different "Down Under" of course hehe! Thanks for the review
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Comment from Jay Squires
Very, very good, very very funny. I'm sure Mikey will be honored to read this, Goeff.
As a matter of fact I'm going to his portfolio and see if he still has the article there, by Krikey!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Very, very good, very very funny. I'm sure Mikey will be honored to read this, Goeff.
As a matter of fact I'm going to his portfolio and see if he still has the article there, by Krikey!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Hi mate I only just read it again this morning. I too agree that it is not fair to get the same amount of reviewing points for a small poem as for reading and reviewing a large essay or book chapter. I would be prepared to pay more for a better spread of the rewards. I don't mind reading stories if they are of interest to me even if the reward is poor. But as the saying goes "You get more flies with honey" ha! Thanks for the great review much appreciated another verse is coming.
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Trouble is, I can't find "Mikey" in the members.
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Michael Cahill
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Thanks
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Comment from Drew Delaney
What a cute poem and funny as well. There's always room for improvement no matter where we go. But this little poem points out the appreciation you have for Mikey. And Fanstory. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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What a cute poem and funny as well. There's always room for improvement no matter where we go. But this little poem points out the appreciation you have for Mikey. And Fanstory. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Thanks another verse coming now I know how Cahill is pronounced up over different to Down under
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Comment from michaelcahill
Hey!! What a surprise. I suppose I would be revealing myself if I said this was the best piece you ever wrote, hahaha! I am sure honored by it though. Thank you very much. Boy, I hope it gets good reviews!!! mikey
Hey! You added a whole bunch. This is great. Good form and lots of details and all of it true. Hahaha. Love this. I may have to print and put on my wall!! Thanks again. Big smiles!!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Hey!! What a surprise. I suppose I would be revealing myself if I said this was the best piece you ever wrote, hahaha! I am sure honored by it though. Thank you very much. Boy, I hope it gets good reviews!!! mikey
Hey! You added a whole bunch. This is great. Good form and lots of details and all of it true. Hahaha. Love this. I may have to print and put on my wall!! Thanks again. Big smiles!!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Aww thanks mate watch for second verse now I got the pronunciation of your handle sorted out. and for goodness sake don't get a big head like mine ok!
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We need the room for those brains!!!
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Comment from lynglyng
Good flow. Good rhyming. I think it could have been a little more complex than what it was. I think you meant it to be quirky.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Good flow. Good rhyming. I think it could have been a little more complex than what it was. I think you meant it to be quirky.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Yeah quirky is right I love old MIkey he has helped a lot of us in here I will be adding another verse shortly. Thanks for coming by.
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.
