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Comment from Capricorn30
This is just too humorous to pass by--a fun writing on a serious poetic Fanstory issue;
Spot-on rhyme makes for a more humorous read, as the battle of Mikey and Tom begins;
I read Michael's prose--he brings some imperative matters to light.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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This is just too humorous to pass by--a fun writing on a serious poetic Fanstory issue;
Spot-on rhyme makes for a more humorous read, as the battle of Mikey and Tom begins;
I read Michael's prose--he brings some imperative matters to light.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hi there not sure we have met before. Glad you are on track with what he is trying to achieve. I do find it a bit fdrustrating with the points system I don't mind reading good stories even if the points are low but it does seem queer that a short poem can get big points but a story of 2000 words or something only gets a few points when it takes the time to read them. Thanks for the review.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a fun little series of limericks. Mikey is cool and I like your little tribute to him. He is valued member of FS.
Teresa
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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This is a fun little series of limericks. Mikey is cool and I like your little tribute to him. He is valued member of FS.
Teresa
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Ho Tab glad you liked it. It only started with one verse but I felt like and one of the reviewers agreed it needed more. Don't think we met before hope to catch up soon getting through 12 reviews here today I think I have a hit hehe! Thanks again.
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I hope to see more of you too:)
Comment from costellsgirl33
This is funny! My boss says, "Krikey", all the time and it makes me laugh all the time. It reminds me of the crocodile hunter and I loved that man! He was so entertaining. So sad when he died.
Your poem was very funny, it has made my morning ;)
It brought such a smile to my face and I needed that.
Thank you
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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This is funny! My boss says, "Krikey", all the time and it makes me laugh all the time. It reminds me of the crocodile hunter and I loved that man! He was so entertaining. So sad when he died.
Your poem was very funny, it has made my morning ;)
It brought such a smile to my face and I needed that.
Thank you
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks friend. Don't think we met before. Check on Michael Cahill's stuff I been getting into trouble for misspelling Krikey but I wanted to be different anyway hehe thanks again see you around.
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You are very welcome, lol! I will check on Michael Cahill's stuff.
Have a great day :)
Arnetta
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is really cute. I enjoyed reading and I agree. I read his suggestions and they were very good. Thank you for bringing them to light again.
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This poem is really cute. I enjoyed reading and I agree. I read his suggestions and they were very good. Thank you for bringing them to light again.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hi barb good to see a familiar face coming through here been inundated with reviews 12 in this round getting writers or typists cramp responding to them all hehe! Seems we have a hit here. Started off as one verse but I felt as did some reviewers it needed more. Thanks for coming by.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Sankey - This is a good, amusing and well rhymed poem. I guessed immediately who you were referring to but have not read his views on improving things on FS. Must do so! Enjoyable read. Kind regards - Dorothy
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Hi Sankey - This is a good, amusing and well rhymed poem. I guessed immediately who you were referring to but have not read his views on improving things on FS. Must do so! Enjoyable read. Kind regards - Dorothy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks Dorothy good to see some familiar names coming through here now appreciate the review. Cheers.
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
Oh I love this poem! The title especially is very attractive with rhyming words.
Yes, I have read the wonderful article michaelcahill posted not long ago, and I totally agree. Some changes need to be made.
Good Job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hello there~!
Oh I love this poem! The title especially is very attractive with rhyming words.
Yes, I have read the wonderful article michaelcahill posted not long ago, and I totally agree. Some changes need to be made.
Good Job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hi Kausar is it thanks for coming by seems we have a hit here yours is the twelfth review today! Oh me getting typists cramp from responding. Thanks again we all love Mikey I respect him for all he does especially caring for the residents he does God Bless you too mate thanks again look for your stuff as we have time.
Comment from mfowler
Mikey roams around this website spreading talent, passion and positivity in his wake. He's easily the most imaginative and flexible poet/writer going around. His work is always highly original and written in that unique witty way. He supports other authors with excellent feedback. I reviewed his essay and agree with what you say. Your whimsical poet in honour of the man is fun to read and will give him a real 'kick'.
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Mikey roams around this website spreading talent, passion and positivity in his wake. He's easily the most imaginative and flexible poet/writer going around. His work is always highly original and written in that unique witty way. He supports other authors with excellent feedback. I reviewed his essay and agree with what you say. Your whimsical poet in honour of the man is fun to read and will give him a real 'kick'.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks friend good to see some familiar names coming through here in tribute to a great bloke. You are review number 14 for today seems we have a hit here. I love Michael met him way back when I first joined FS a year ago and he has been a great help to many of us for me for sure as well. Cheers.
Comment from judiverse
This is cleverly done. I like the conversational tone and use of dialect. This is an interesting topic, and I read Michael's post about the FS situation of member dollars and points being the same for poetry and longer prose works. He made a good point. Your rhyme and flow in this both work out well. You carry a jaunty tone throughout. judi
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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This is cleverly done. I like the conversational tone and use of dialect. This is an interesting topic, and I read Michael's post about the FS situation of member dollars and points being the same for poetry and longer prose works. He made a good point. Your rhyme and flow in this both work out well. You carry a jaunty tone throughout. judi
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks friend good to see some regular friends of mine coming through this has been a real hit about a swell guy. You are review 15 for today had a ton yesterday as well. God Bless
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You're welcome. You're really hard at work reviewing today. I doubt that I ever achieve that many. judi
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Well not reviewing more like responding to all the reviews I just added another verse with his name in it now In know how Cahill goes Up over the editor was playing up too had to go in three times!
Comment from Nosha17
We sure have haddock where I'm from in England and we say 'Crikey", too! I already sent my comments to Mikey on his article and I agree with what he is trying to do, also. Great whimsical rhyme in support of a good cause. Enjoyable read, Faye
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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We sure have haddock where I'm from in England and we say 'Crikey", too! I already sent my comments to Mikey on his article and I agree with what he is trying to do, also. Great whimsical rhyme in support of a good cause. Enjoyable read, Faye
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks Faye yeah it is Crikey we got it from 'Old Dart' I am sure. I just wanted to be a bit different. See my poem song about Being Different in my Book of Poultry. Thanks again. Not sure if we have met before. This started out ads a one verser but it grew like Topsy hehe. No one from UNcle Sam has said they have Haddock yet either hehe. Cheers.
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You're very welcome, I don't think you have reviewed my poetry, but I definitely read your Fishing trip story. We are more connoisseurs of fish (+chips, maybe)Brits and Australians, I think! Faye
Comment from Ben Colder
I suppose there are many ways to improve Fan Story. The best one yet is get rid of the bias faceless committee who judges the contest. They are most assuredly bias. Cute poem. Mike, I than you have a new fan.
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I suppose there are many ways to improve Fan Story. The best one yet is get rid of the bias faceless committee who judges the contest. They are most assuredly bias. Cute poem. Mike, I than you have a new fan.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hi Ben Mike Didn't write it I did. Been a fan of Michael's for a year now as it is just on a year since I joined FS. Thanks for the review.
