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Comment from Robin Gilmor
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Ok, it is a bit different, but speaks the truth. Enjoyable with a good laugh.
Thank you for sharing as your frustration is certainly shared by many.
Smiles to you. Robin :)

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Thanks Robin sorry about the FS error in there the A thing. Tried to remove it seven times Grrr! Appreciate the great review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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A great tribute to an excellent writer. Cute and funny, but a very worthy tribute:

Is this a typo or evil eddie playing games. Thanks for sharing this, my friend. I bet you have doubled the number of his fans~Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Hi Debbie there is an FS stuff up the "A" thing. I went in seven times this morning trying to remove it!! Grrr! Thanks for a great review. Michael Cahill and I go back a long way in FS I met him when I first came to FS just on a year ago.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi Sankey,

Fun, quirky, and a wonderful paying homage to Mikey. No better compliment can one pay another fellow writer.

Great job!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Thanks Jax the FS Editor is giving me arrrggghhh!! I just went in three times to try and correct it hope you caught the latest verse!
reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 04-Aug-2014
    Hey kiddo... Check this line out.

    UpsetĀ his pets
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Yep I went in three times it is an FS edit quirk see if it is still there I got rid of it three times as I said see the new verse I added and I fixed the colours AGAIN I hope
reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 04-Aug-2014
    It's still there...! What I have found with the quirks in FS. You may have to recopy/paste.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Grrrr!! I have spent too much time on it already get to it later I did an explain in my profile everyone knows about those! Thanks
reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 04-Aug-2014
    Still there. Can't blame you for being mad. Did you erase the whole thing and re-do the whole thing instead of the whole line.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    I just did a cut and paste of the lot removing the A and it came back
reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 04-Aug-2014
    DARN! It's still there.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    I just wrote to Tom six times now I tried to clear it if I go into Advanced editor it messes the colours
reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 04-Aug-2014
    He should let you use a new form and not dock you anything! I have to go, but will check back later. Good luck!
Comment from victor 66
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Michael Cahill and I have communicated several times and although I don't know him as well as you do, I think quite highly of his creativity and admire his commitment to this site. I think it is most appropriate that you would dedicate this poem to "Mikey". Best wishes.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Hi Victor thanks for coming by. I met Michael Cahill in my very early days here in Fan Story. I have just gone a year here and have another year paid for so I look foreward to meeting a lot more of the folks whom have given wonderful reviews of my poem on old Mikey. He and I have so mnuch in common our agers are close we are both musicians (I have retired) we both come from the same era of Vietnam and all that plus we both 'go off on Tangents hehe" We may even add another verse yet so keep watching.
reply by victor 66 on 04-Aug-2014
    OK, Sankey, I'm on it.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Hi Victor my name is Geoff if you like
reply by victor 66 on 04-Aug-2014
    Thank you, Geoff. Victor,
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Just got a new verse and FS was messing with the edit had to go back in three times grrrr!
Comment from Kingsland
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This has the feel of being written down under. Oh yeah, here in Western New York. Most fish fries are serving Haddock. This was a very humorous piece of poetic art. I really enjoyed reading it... john

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Hi John ok first one to tell me they have Haddock in NY. had an English reviewer related to the Haddock and seeing Mikey and I both are tangent me we do both go off down the paddock hehe. Hoping to add another verse yet! Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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I read Mikey's ideas for improvements and also agree wiht much of what he said. Mikey's a fun guy, and I enjoy the wit and humor in his writing, but he has a much deeper philosophical side as well. Mikey must be at lesat three 'multiple personalities' but they work together beautifully. And yes, he IS the bard... no doubt in my mind. :)

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Hi Phyllis been good seeing some of my regular friends coming through here. Been hit with a heap of reviews today you are number 13 oops hehe! Thanks again.
Comment from gazzagodbod
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crikey in the uk lol great tribute to mikey by crikey loved it my friend and i bet mikey does too thanks for sharing it xxgazzaxx

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Hi mate not met you before Thanks for the review I do know correct spelling for Crikey just wanted to be a bit cheeky.
    See you around.
Comment from marion
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Hi there

What an amusing poem, and a great dedication to Mikey! Your words flow, the lines each opening to another slice of humour. It's great when you get a reviewer than can and does help. Well presented. I enjoyed. And I'll watch out for Mikey! Marion.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Hi Marion look for Michael Cahill I was gonna do another verse with his last name in it but I had to check how they say it "Up Over" as we pronounce it different "Down Under" but never ended up doing the verse anyway. Cheers and thanks for coming by.
reply by marion on 04-Aug-2014
    I forgot to add - LOVE the title. Very catching!
Comment from Eric1
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Lovely string of limericks nicely tied together and turned into a real fun poem in tribute to the wonderful Mikey, not sure that 'roem' is a word though, I mean roem wasn't built in a day, lol.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Yeah well it went with "Poem" ok I thought I explained that hehe goes with the madness of dear old Mikey though if you don'[t know him look for Michael Cahill's profile. Thanks for the review.
reply by Eric1 on 04-Aug-2014
    You're welcome sankey, and I will my friend.
Comment from acerisestory
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This is very cute. You've taken five limericks and tied them into a fun -- and funny poem. I am pleased to learn a new word: 'roem'.

Great rhyming; nice flow. Good laughs. Thank you for sharing! Alana

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Hi Alana not sure we have met before 'roem' was a rhyme with poem pok thought I explained that. Typical of Mikey's whack y ways too look for Michael Cahill if you don't know him. Thanks for the review.