No Email Birthday Card
Sent this to my sister who has everything16 total reviews
Comment from boxergirl
And I am sure "lala" loved it. I have found that most people love to get something personal and what could be more personal than a poem. Very sweet. 8-)
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And I am sure "lala" loved it. I have found that most people love to get something personal and what could be more personal than a poem. Very sweet. 8-)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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iT WAS JUST YESTERDAY AND IT WAS LATE WHEN I SENT IT. TROUBLE WITH COMPUTER, So I imagine she will read it today
thxs for your great comments in your review.
lulube
Comment from lakeport
No email Birthday card, indeed that's a beautiful and loving birthday wish for your sister LALA. Thank for sharing it. God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
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No email Birthday card, indeed that's a beautiful and loving birthday wish for your sister LALA. Thank for sharing it. God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs for your read and review lakey glad you liked it
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lulube
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your welcome,Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from adewpearl
good alliteration in buzzing bumble bees
lovely descriptive detail
good use of enjambment
good assonance in birds chirp
what a delightful way to wish your sister a happy birthday :-) Brooke
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good alliteration in buzzing bumble bees
lovely descriptive detail
good use of enjambment
good assonance in birds chirp
what a delightful way to wish your sister a happy birthday :-) Brooke
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs for your great review and approval. It means a lot to me Brooke. thank you so much
lulube
Comment from mfowler
The world of technology has changed the ways we communicate, hence the way we express love and emotions of all sorts. You've picked on these electronic cards with their gee whiz gizmo gadgets which dazzle, to make this clear contrast between what matters to you in this relationship. It's clearly not the e-cards (been guilty of sending these myself), but your words that you have to offer; a greater benchmark of human relationships than something downloaded and sent away with a click. Thought provoking, contemporary look at communication and relationship.
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The world of technology has changed the ways we communicate, hence the way we express love and emotions of all sorts. You've picked on these electronic cards with their gee whiz gizmo gadgets which dazzle, to make this clear contrast between what matters to you in this relationship. It's clearly not the e-cards (been guilty of sending these myself), but your words that you have to offer; a greater benchmark of human relationships than something downloaded and sent away with a click. Thought provoking, contemporary look at communication and relationship.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Thxs for this wonderful, descriptive review. my sis and I do not always have the best sister relationship, she being filthy rich and I living in poverty, but I still feel the need to prove that I am worthy of her financial help over the past 4 yrs. All I have is my ability to put words down on paper. Although this is not really put out for the family, some do know more of my work than others do.
A touchy subject but I will not be put down for my physical misfortune that has subjected me to welfare. I'm hoping this happy birthday email brings her attitude for our sisterhood closer. I'm her little sister, old, but still little.
lulube
Comment from Jackarrie
Very few words are sent on Birthday's, nowadays if on Face book it is just a Happy Birthday, I have been writing little poems for my family on Facebook.
My Mother before she died still wrote here letters and cards by hand. and hated the modern ways.
You have written lovely words to your Sister LaLa,
Well done
Mary
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Very few words are sent on Birthday's, nowadays if on Face book it is just a Happy Birthday, I have been writing little poems for my family on Facebook.
My Mother before she died still wrote here letters and cards by hand. and hated the modern ways.
You have written lovely words to your Sister LaLa,
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs for sharing your family info with me. also thxs for reading and for your review. Glad you like it.
lulube
Comment from Smoothiecool
your chosen words are full of uplifting expressions of love
to send on a birthday
good visual
good enjambment to allow free flow in verses
para 4 typo error "still"
words are always the best
cheers Smoothiecool
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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your chosen words are full of uplifting expressions of love
to send on a birthday
good visual
good enjambment to allow free flow in verses
para 4 typo error "still"
words are always the best
cheers Smoothiecool
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs for the typo and for this great review smoothie.
Thxs for the security in words are the best.
lulube
