No Email Birthday Card
Sent this to my sister who has everything16 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Lulube - This is so sweet - you say your sister has everything - well this poem from you is one thing she will not already have. It's lovely - a lovely picture with beautiful, personal words composed by a sister. What better present could she get? Kind regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Hi Lulube - This is so sweet - you say your sister has everything - well this poem from you is one thing she will not already have. It's lovely - a lovely picture with beautiful, personal words composed by a sister. What better present could she get? Kind regards Dorothy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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thxs so much for this support Dorothy and for your review. Glad you liked it
lulube
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Gosh, this is cute...BUT...why did you post this as prose?
Frankly, I want someone to go stand in front of a rack of cards, ponder, peruse and select the card. Then I want to be worth the effort and the cost of a stamp. Now, personal words and poetry by my sister, the author are even more valuable, but I want a little more effort than a post on a web site.
This is not prose and what might have made it an interesting story would have been some personal info with the card sandwiched between your written feelings of love or hate.
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Gosh, this is cute...BUT...why did you post this as prose?
Frankly, I want someone to go stand in front of a rack of cards, ponder, peruse and select the card. Then I want to be worth the effort and the cost of a stamp. Now, personal words and poetry by my sister, the author are even more valuable, but I want a little more effort than a post on a web site.
This is not prose and what might have made it an interesting story would have been some personal info with the card sandwiched between your written feelings of love or hate.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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I posted it as a letter. I sent it to her as an email letter/message. thxs so much for your honest opinions and your review.
lulube
Comment from Selina Stambi
cannot send you
an email birthday card. .. me too! It seems a bit tacky, doesn't it?
The space you describe is just heavenly, Lori. Happy birthday, sis LaLa!
zxx
Sonali
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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cannot send you
an email birthday card. .. me too! It seems a bit tacky, doesn't it?
The space you describe is just heavenly, Lori. Happy birthday, sis LaLa!
zxx
Sonali
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs so much for your support Sonali always appreciated
lulube
Comment from Bina1
What a spectacular way to remember your sister on her special day! Her own personal poem, that is going "round the world" via Fanstory, in celebration of her day! Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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What a spectacular way to remember your sister on her special day! Her own personal poem, that is going "round the world" via Fanstory, in celebration of her day! Well done!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs for your wonderful review. I will repeat your comment for her
lulube
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am sure your sister will greatly enjoy reading this wonderful birthday post. It is super. It flowed well and was cheerful.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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I am sure your sister will greatly enjoy reading this wonderful birthday post. It is super. It flowed well and was cheerful.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs for your review. I sent it to her as an email. lol Just not the moving kind
lulube
Comment from krys123
Lulube;
if I was there going to get a gift on my birthday it would have been just this.
Is there a beautifully written piece of work and poetry that is so well-written and I can feel it directly coming from your innermost feelings and heart.
When in a very great imagination that is very inventive and creative were you were so descriptive and expressive in your imagery.
Thank you so much especially for sharing this for everyone especially me and may the Lord be with you always Lori.
Alex
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Lulube;
if I was there going to get a gift on my birthday it would have been just this.
Is there a beautifully written piece of work and poetry that is so well-written and I can feel it directly coming from your innermost feelings and heart.
When in a very great imagination that is very inventive and creative were you were so descriptive and expressive in your imagery.
Thank you so much especially for sharing this for everyone especially me and may the Lord be with you always Lori.
Alex
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs so much for your gracious comments and review Alex
lulube
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You are so sincerely welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Lulube - it is often hard to find that perfect something for those who have everything. I liked the simplistic love in this one - it shines all on its own.
Nice card and well penned.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Dear Lulube - it is often hard to find that perfect something for those who have everything. I liked the simplistic love in this one - it shines all on its own.
Nice card and well penned.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs so much for your review MO and glad it shone for you
lulube
Comment from Cajungirl
Hers wishing your sister a very happy birthday. What a very special personal and loving birthday wish. So much more special than a e-card. Bless you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Hers wishing your sister a very happy birthday. What a very special personal and loving birthday wish. So much more special than a e-card. Bless you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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thxs so much for this great review. I have many birthday wishes from friends on fs to relay to her now. thank you
lulube
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You are welcome.
Comment from country ranch writer
SENDING YOUR WORDS OF LOVE TO HER ON HER BIRTHDAY WILL JUST HAVE TO BE GOOD ENOUGHT TO SHOW HER AT LEAST YOU REMEMBERED SOME DON'T GET THAT
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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SENDING YOUR WORDS OF LOVE TO HER ON HER BIRTHDAY WILL JUST HAVE TO BE GOOD ENOUGHT TO SHOW HER AT LEAST YOU REMEMBERED SOME DON'T GET THAT
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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You're so right with that one.
we'll see today if she replies on it. sent it last night
lulube
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WE CAN ONLY HOPE
Comment from TAB_that's me
Hey this is a great birthday card for your sister. I'm sure she will enjoy it. Great imagery throughout! Your name is Lori?
Teresa
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Hey this is a great birthday card for your sister. I'm sure she will enjoy it. Great imagery throughout! Your name is Lori?
Teresa
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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yes I'm Lori, use lulube as a pen name. thxs for your review and I hope she appreciates that which has no price tag on it.
lulube
