Errant Climes
From Grit to Glory12 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, fleefleflum, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the one who overcame the vestiges of the past and helped others on their journey, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, fleefleflum, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the one who overcame the vestiges of the past and helped others on their journey, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of abcb rhyme
excellent enjambment that carries the story line from line to line and stanza to stanza
good alliteration in phrases like crook and crime and defamatory dirge, stained soul and weaved her way
a powerful poetic portrait
Brooke
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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solid use of abcb rhyme
excellent enjambment that carries the story line from line to line and stanza to stanza
good alliteration in phrases like crook and crime and defamatory dirge, stained soul and weaved her way
a powerful poetic portrait
Brooke
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Brooke :-). I had no idea where this was going when I started so it was quite an adventure!
Mike
