5-7-5 (all work and no play)
5-7-5 contest entry- advertisement for human cloning4 total reviews
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the human cloning 5-7-7 prompt. Great job with the description you use. I like your aha moment. Great picture. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the human cloning 5-7-7 prompt. Great job with the description you use. I like your aha moment. Great picture. Best of luck.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thanks for a great review. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Karen B.
A creative take on the writing prompt, well written and a great entry into the contest. Love the picture you picked to go with it, too. Good luck in the voting booth!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
A creative take on the writing prompt, well written and a great entry into the contest. Love the picture you picked to go with it, too. Good luck in the voting booth!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thank you for a wonderful review, Karen.
Comment from Set in Stone
Very clever and unique approach to the topic. I like the advertising approach. Catchy triple rhyme in the last line.
Good use of questions to involve prospective customers
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
Very clever and unique approach to the topic. I like the advertising approach. Catchy triple rhyme in the last line.
Good use of questions to involve prospective customers
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thanks for a great review. I can only hope advertising will pay off. :)
Comment from RYME4U
This is well done. It has good flow and rhythm and has kept within the parameters of the contest rules. Good advice offered by your words.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
This is well done. It has good flow and rhythm and has kept within the parameters of the contest rules. Good advice offered by your words.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thanks for a great review, Ryme4U!