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5-7-5 contest entry- advertisement for human cloning

4 total reviews 
Comment from rrabinow
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the human cloning 5-7-7 prompt. Great job with the description you use. I like your aha moment. Great picture. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
    Thanks for a great review. :)
reply by rrabinow on 31-Jul-2014
    You are welcome.
Comment from Karen B.
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A creative take on the writing prompt, well written and a great entry into the contest. Love the picture you picked to go with it, too. Good luck in the voting booth!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
    Thank you for a wonderful review, Karen.
Comment from Set in Stone
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Very clever and unique approach to the topic. I like the advertising approach. Catchy triple rhyme in the last line.
Good use of questions to involve prospective customers

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
    Thanks for a great review. I can only hope advertising will pay off. :)
Comment from RYME4U
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This is well done. It has good flow and rhythm and has kept within the parameters of the contest rules. Good advice offered by your words.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
    Thanks for a great review, Ryme4U!