Possibilities
Sometimes we need to start over; look again...31 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
YES! We all need to start over beginning with attitude. That is such a good quote. I need to remember this one. Congratulations on your contest winning. You must be delighted. Awesome!
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YES! We all need to start over beginning with attitude. That is such a good quote. I need to remember this one. Congratulations on your contest winning. You must be delighted. Awesome!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from Mark Valentine
First of all, I'm thinking you drew the picture as the red rose is mentioned in the poem - it's beautiful! The poem itself has such a warm inviting Christian message - reading it totally put me in a relaxed and open frame of mind. Who would not respond "yes" to this? This is evangelization at its best. Congrats on a well-deserved contest winand thanks for this poem - it's going on the bookcase.
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First of all, I'm thinking you drew the picture as the red rose is mentioned in the poem - it's beautiful! The poem itself has such a warm inviting Christian message - reading it totally put me in a relaxed and open frame of mind. Who would not respond "yes" to this? This is evangelization at its best. Congrats on a well-deserved contest winand thanks for this poem - it's going on the bookcase.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. Definatley uplifting. I like the metaphors that you used in your poem, especially the ripples born of thought. Great job!
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Definatley uplifting. I like the metaphors that you used in your poem, especially the ripples born of thought. Great job!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
Comment from jandeck
Beautiful, uplifting, inspiring message. This one has it all, and written in lovely verse to boot! Everyone should read this and follow it's message!
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Beautiful, uplifting, inspiring message. This one has it all, and written in lovely verse to boot! Everyone should read this and follow it's message!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
Comment from amada
Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a awesome poem to look at life from a different point of view. Friendship and companionship, so important as the company of the Almighty.
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Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a awesome poem to look at life from a different point of view. Friendship and companionship, so important as the company of the Almighty.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
Comment from mfowler
I found your well formed poem to be subtly persuasive and full of positivity. The premise that through gathering in friendship, accepting different talents/pathways, and sharing in fellowship with Christ, gives a wonderful picture of a caring, supportive community that looks at different 'possibilities' for accepting and loving its members. I wish you the best in the competition.
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I found your well formed poem to be subtly persuasive and full of positivity. The premise that through gathering in friendship, accepting different talents/pathways, and sharing in fellowship with Christ, gives a wonderful picture of a caring, supportive community that looks at different 'possibilities' for accepting and loving its members. I wish you the best in the competition.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
Comment from honeytree
I love the art work here for these words written.
Life can be full of all sorts of possibilities.
We have to explore what is there
for us all to see and experience within our lives.
Possibilities within our lives can happen.
honey tree
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I love the art work here for these words written.
Life can be full of all sorts of possibilities.
We have to explore what is there
for us all to see and experience within our lives.
Possibilities within our lives can happen.
honey tree
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
Comment from royowen
A beautifully uplifting poem in the contest of the same name! Articulately written in descriptive expressive language about your devotion and devotions about the one and only His Son Jesus Christ! A well structured and composed poem, spoken in eloquent language. Nice abcb rhyming, even meter! Good luck, Blessings, Roy.
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A beautifully uplifting poem in the contest of the same name! Articulately written in descriptive expressive language about your devotion and devotions about the one and only His Son Jesus Christ! A well structured and composed poem, spoken in eloquent language. Nice abcb rhyming, even meter! Good luck, Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
Comment from rjuselius
to have a second chance in life is the greatest gift of all! your poem accurately describes the start of a new life. nice one.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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to have a second chance in life is the greatest gift of all! your poem accurately describes the start of a new life. nice one.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, such sweet sentiment, serene scenes painted so vividly by your magical pen - this is lovely, and fulfills the requirements of the prompt admirably, in my opinion. Nicely done. :) (Best of Luck.)
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Ah, such sweet sentiment, serene scenes painted so vividly by your magical pen - this is lovely, and fulfills the requirements of the prompt admirably, in my opinion. Nicely done. :) (Best of Luck.)
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
