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Even in darkness, man is still a reflection of the Divine.
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Comment from
gazzagodbod
wow miss wolf this is the first i have read of your work very impressive my friend love the dark presentation and your words just wonderful xxgazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
Comment from
Pyrrho
wings/strings rhyme is forced
insanity rolls the dice ... good metaphor for random happenings of life.
prayer/stair also forced
With a little work you could eliminate your tendency to use forced rhymes instead of giving up the actual meaning you seek so cavalierly.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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