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Comment from Jean Lutz
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Another suggestion is filling a small rainproof bag with items such as toothbrush/paste, deodorant, soap and cloth, bottle of water and maybe vitamins and cereal bar. All can be purchased at a dollar store. While some just need a touch, a smile, someone to look in their eyes

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
    Thank you Jean. So kind. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from lakeport
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I saw a man, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem, very nice flow, thanks for sharing it. God bless you. lakeport.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
    Thank you lakeport. Blessings. Barbara
reply by lakeport on 07-Aug-2014
    your welcome,Hugs! lakeport.
Comment from djsaxon
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Great honest write. Too often we become the passers by and live to regret our lack of response. Love the economy of the write and the ultimate sentiment. Cheers - DJ

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
    Thank you DJ. Blessings. Barbara