The Ether Wind
Considering the boundaries of Gods Creations15 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
An amazing poem with such good metaphysical thoughts of the creation of Earth and how we are so important part of God's creation-
Take joy in knowing we all are just one in this tiny orb spinning round the sun
Greater yet is to know there is much more soul in-light-in-men-to be won
As we journey beyond forever our mission to find God has only begun
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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An amazing poem with such good metaphysical thoughts of the creation of Earth and how we are so important part of God's creation-
Take joy in knowing we all are just one in this tiny orb spinning round the sun
Greater yet is to know there is much more soul in-light-in-men-to be won
As we journey beyond forever our mission to find God has only begun
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Wow...Gert, thank you so very much for this lovely review and I cannot express how delighted to see you name back on my screen!! Blessings dear friend! Vance
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You are welcome Vance
Gert
Comment from lakeport
The ether wind, indeed the powerful wind, Tha's a very heartfelt expressed story poem,very nice rhyming and flow, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.lakeport.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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The ether wind, indeed the powerful wind, Tha's a very heartfelt expressed story poem,very nice rhyming and flow, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.lakeport.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Thanks lakeport....always a delight to hear from you! Vance
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your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from kiwijenny
What a cool concept His Grayness......I think you should change your color or monochrome to His Whiteness......light is all colors
Well expressed thoughts that made me think deeply ...I appreciate that
God bless
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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What a cool concept His Grayness......I think you should change your color or monochrome to His Whiteness......light is all colors
Well expressed thoughts that made me think deeply ...I appreciate that
God bless
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Hi Kiwijenny: so glad to hear from you and so many thanks for your generous comments. From out of the Grayness is the title of my book explained in my portfolio and I'd love to know what you think of that writing....let me know?? Thanks, Vance
Comment from adewpearl
good use of enjambment to keep ideas flowing from line to line
good assonance in divine mind and in surprise/alive
good consonance in form of life or physical
I like the alliterative hyphenate of micro-mirror
thoughts like light beams - excellent use of simile
a thoughtfully spiritual closing
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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good use of enjambment to keep ideas flowing from line to line
good assonance in divine mind and in surprise/alive
good consonance in form of life or physical
I like the alliterative hyphenate of micro-mirror
thoughts like light beams - excellent use of simile
a thoughtfully spiritual closing
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Thanks Brooke: it's always so nice to hear from you and always lessons in poetry! Vance
Comment from tbacha58
Take joy in knowing we all are just one in this tiny orb spinning round the sun
Greater yet is to know there is much more soul in-light-in-men-to be won
As we journey beyond forever our mission to find God has only begun
Hi Vance, sorry I was late, a beautiful positive poem, written from a huge heart, who always comes out with philosophical poem, to upgrade our brain to start thinking of your sayings. Enjoyed and missed your poems. Love Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Take joy in knowing we all are just one in this tiny orb spinning round the sun
Greater yet is to know there is much more soul in-light-in-men-to be won
As we journey beyond forever our mission to find God has only begun
Hi Vance, sorry I was late, a beautiful positive poem, written from a huge heart, who always comes out with philosophical poem, to upgrade our brain to start thinking of your sayings. Enjoyed and missed your poems. Love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Dear Terry: what a lovely review and such encouraging thoughts and wishes. I always love to hear from you and find blessings in all you reply! I hope life is beautiful for you and all is well as you deserve it so much!...Love and hugs! Blessings, Vance
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Vance - This shares that deeper wisdom of faith, where we find it and how we live through it really can be so full of love, joy and even sorrow....but you pen this one with an introspective feel which I loved.
Your formatting has some evil eddy between your stanzas:) Otherwise great post and thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Dear Vance - This shares that deeper wisdom of faith, where we find it and how we live through it really can be so full of love, joy and even sorrow....but you pen this one with an introspective feel which I loved.
Your formatting has some evil eddy between your stanzas:) Otherwise great post and thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Dear Maureen: Thanks so very much and I shall attempt a fix on the editing. Hope you are feeling better and so glad to see you back...I did indeed miss you .... and no hugs a real bummer!!!
Joy and Hugs! VAnce
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sending lots of hugs to make up for my absence :)
Hugs
M
Comment from Spitfire
Wow! This is so in tune with metaphysical teachings. An interesting color arrangement that fits in with the idea of a new paradigm. Favorite line: We all float about in God's favorite universal play-station of universality.
Two different ways to read this line. :-)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Wow! This is so in tune with metaphysical teachings. An interesting color arrangement that fits in with the idea of a new paradigm. Favorite line: We all float about in God's favorite universal play-station of universality.
Two different ways to read this line. :-)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Dear Shari: thanks for this very glowing review and I'm really delighted that you enjoyed this. Vance
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Vance,
"The Ether Wind" is an excellent poem full of beautiful figurative language and imagery. It fact I would say it is all figurative language meant to express an inexpressible truth of the spirit.(a boundless hologram)
Preston
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Hi, Vance,
"The Ether Wind" is an excellent poem full of beautiful figurative language and imagery. It fact I would say it is all figurative language meant to express an inexpressible truth of the spirit.(a boundless hologram)
Preston
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Dear Preston: Thank you sincerely for this compact and powerful review...I'm honored! All the best! Vance
Comment from GE Parson
Hey Brother Vance,
That's pretty deep stuff. I really like this spiritual philasophy and the play you put on words. "Divine mind dust"
"God's universal play station"
Yep I'm very impressed with how you think - keep it coming.
The Lord's blessings upon you,
St. Jerry
PS Just curios what is your church denomination back ground?
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Hey Brother Vance,
That's pretty deep stuff. I really like this spiritual philasophy and the play you put on words. "Divine mind dust"
"God's universal play station"
Yep I'm very impressed with how you think - keep it coming.
The Lord's blessings upon you,
St. Jerry
PS Just curios what is your church denomination back ground?
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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St. Jerry: Wow brother..what an encouraging and uplifting review! This subject area is always a dangerous field for poets but it's where my mind lives so I have to deal with it. Most of my church-goings have been Bible Presbyterian but I'm compelled with astrophysics. Blessings dear friend! Vance
Comment from TOMORAL
We are definitely all connected and some get to feel that connection here on Fanstory. How lucky am I to have spun into you? This is excellent. Wish I had a six. I have to book mark this one to read when I get down or confused about life.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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We are definitely all connected and some get to feel that connection here on Fanstory. How lucky am I to have spun into you? This is excellent. Wish I had a six. I have to book mark this one to read when I get down or confused about life.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Dear TOMORAL: your writing don't express much confusion but I understand we all seek to know more. Only true GRATITUDE can harden our foundations of Faith and weaken the confusions. Thank you soooo much for your great review and blessings in knowing this may have been a bright spot in your life today! Vance
