Death Fantasy #17
Short Story-50 Word Contest Entry33 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
oh yes this gets a six and more if i could double it for you. made me laugh as i grew up with Dolly and she was quite the show person and celebrety
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oh yes this gets a six and more if i could double it for you. made me laugh as i grew up with Dolly and she was quite the show person and celebrety
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
better hope she don't stumble onto your face. them boobs probably pack a hellacious wallop! That's a load. How did you do on this contest? Not as bad way to go. Funny poem. wackydo
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better hope she don't stumble onto your face. them boobs probably pack a hellacious wallop! That's a load. How did you do on this contest? Not as bad way to go. Funny poem. wackydo
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ha ha! Yeah, Michael, I suppose that would make one run til they dropped, trying to catch up. For me, it would be Selma Hayek, but who's splittin' hairs here?
Funny stuff, and all in just 50 words, no less. Imagine that...
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Ha ha! Yeah, Michael, I suppose that would make one run til they dropped, trying to catch up. For me, it would be Selma Hayek, but who's splittin' hairs here?
Funny stuff, and all in just 50 words, no less. Imagine that...
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Haha, oh Mike, you are terrible :) I hope everyone reading this story appreciates your wonderful sense of humour. Good luck in the contest.
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Haha, oh Mike, you are terrible :) I hope everyone reading this story appreciates your wonderful sense of humour. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
Comment from tfawcus
What a way to go! I think you are right about not needing any author notes! I had heard tell that your whole life flashes before you at the moment of death. However, I think your alternative sounds better!
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What a way to go! I think you are right about not needing any author notes! I had heard tell that your whole life flashes before you at the moment of death. However, I think your alternative sounds better!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
Comment from prefabmouse
I laughed my ass off and out loud too. Good job, I really loved it. Good luck on the contest. I can't see how you will lose. LOL
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I laughed my ass off and out loud too. Good job, I really loved it. Good luck on the contest. I can't see how you will lose. LOL
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
Comment from flylikeaneagle
08 July 2014
Michael: Boys will be boys. Dolly paid for her gifts and she is nice too. You painted an image that guys would enjoy.
flylikeaneagle
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08 July 2014
Michael: Boys will be boys. Dolly paid for her gifts and she is nice too. You painted an image that guys would enjoy.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
Comment from jmdg1954
I agree with you in your notes... I thought your story was laugh out loud funny, especially if we're talking about 25 years ago!!
Phew... What a way to go! Then if your jogging forward I would love to be behind Heather Locklear!
Nicely done... John
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I agree with you in your notes... I thought your story was laugh out loud funny, especially if we're talking about 25 years ago!!
Phew... What a way to go! Then if your jogging forward I would love to be behind Heather Locklear!
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
Comment from krys123
Mikey;
what have you been smoking? This is very funny and especially if they guy thing. Might be a little offensive to some women but I kind a like it.
It is very descriptive manner articulately expressed in throughout. And there aren't any syntax errors that I could find.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the Lord be with you especially in your time of need.
Alex
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Mikey;
what have you been smoking? This is very funny and especially if they guy thing. Might be a little offensive to some women but I kind a like it.
It is very descriptive manner articulately expressed in throughout. And there aren't any syntax errors that I could find.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the Lord be with you especially in your time of need.
Alex
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting. I can't say that this a bad wish for a way to go. The guy would certainly have had a great visual many years ago, but now, I'm not so sure. Funny stuff.
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Very interesting. I can't say that this a bad wish for a way to go. The guy would certainly have had a great visual many years ago, but now, I'm not so sure. Funny stuff.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
