Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I have never seen a mummy unwrap so fast! Very creative and unusual write. Good rhyming and choice of words in your engaging story of a mummy on the loo (that's how we spell it in England)Good visuals and enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Oops! Thanks, Faye, I will have to correct that! You know us damn Yankees. We rarely get anything right the first time out, LOL! :)

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

You've done what I thought no one could do, dear Dean... you made me start laughing from the first stanza and continue on to the last. And, then you made me wish there were just a few stanzas more. I haven't had as much fun reading in years.

Why can't FanStory have a 7 star to be used only once a year! You'd certainly have gotten it from me!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Hah ha, thanks, Jay, for appreciating this silly little dibbit, and for recognizing it for precisely what it was meant to be...nasty toilet humor with an ancient "twist", LOL!

Besides, Jay, it's all your fault, by the way. You started it with your hilarious Lawnmower Man poem, heh heh...

Comment from DanielEkine

Exceptional

Your artwork just keeps getting outrageously beautiful. I am always intrigued by your work. You never stop arousing my interest. Great job.
"I am filthy mummified remains." Such a unique line. Definitely a king but.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Thanks, Daniel, and thanks so much for having a sense of humor and appreciating it for the silly nonsense that it is. Some folks have no sense of humor at all.

Thanks again! :}

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

As a mother who has raised four boys, I've heard worse, but it is pretty good. I was wondering why a mummy would need to use the toilet anyway. Cute poem.

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Like I said in the description...just silly nonsense as usual, Barbara. Doesn't anyone have a sense of humor anymore, LOL?

You were warned, in advance, my dear.

Thanks! :)

reply by barbara.wilkey on 07-Jul-2014

I never thought of a mummy having to use the toilet. Hey, I had first grade little boys go into the bathroom and have a contest to see who could pee the farthest. As I was chewing them out, I had to struggle to keep from laughing. I also wanted to know who won, but couldn't ask.

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Ha ha, I would have liked to have been a fly on the wall for that one, Barbara!

Thanks again!

Respectfully

~Dean

reply by barbara.wilkey on 07-Jul-2014

I happen to be a huge fan of ornery little boys. Give me them over girls any day.

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Oh, I'll say a rousing "AMEN" to that, Barbara! Our daughter, who is seventeen, has been infinitely more of a handful than our twenty-year-old son ever thoguht of being!

reply by barbara.wilkey on 07-Jul-2014

I only raised boys and love my three daughter-in-laws greatly. I have a 21 year old still at home, college, but as a first grade teacher those little girls are sneaky and down right mean. A mean girl is worse than any little boy I have met. Some little girls are pure angels, but those others. OH MY!!!

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

:-0...don't I know it! I'll take care of boys at any age over girls any day of the week. You, though, a first grade teacher? You have to put up with the little buggers, LOL. I'm sure you do an excellent job at not only teaching them, but keeping them in line as well.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Dean,

I couldn't resist when I saw you pop up. What a hoot this is. Always look forward to your artwork/animation paired with your stories/poems. This is no exception.

What's a 'butt' to do? Priceless!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Ha, at first I thought you said, "when I saw you poop up,", Jax. I'm dyin' over here I'm laughing so hard.

Thanks for appreciating the silly, fun spirited fun that it was meant to be. Some people, who claim to be writers, have no imagination or sense of humor at all. How do you think they get by so successfully that way? I can't imagine...