Be Careful What You Wish For
Short Story-A prompt I couldn't enter22 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
Holy hilarious hybrid of Mad magazine and The Twilight Zone. Your voice of Jack Daniels is ssslurred perfectly. And come to think of it, being the last man on earth would really suck....after a while. This was nothing but fun and it shows. This and the fart in the elevator (and now fart girl) story shows that you have a flair for humor. Keep 'em coming.
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Holy hilarious hybrid of Mad magazine and The Twilight Zone. Your voice of Jack Daniels is ssslurred perfectly. And come to think of it, being the last man on earth would really suck....after a while. This was nothing but fun and it shows. This and the fart in the elevator (and now fart girl) story shows that you have a flair for humor. Keep 'em coming.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
Comment from Liandra
Hilarious - you have an amazing imagination to have created this funny story. I almost cried with laughing at the 'Fart girl.' The complete story is brilliant.
:) Liandra
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Hilarious - you have an amazing imagination to have created this funny story. I almost cried with laughing at the 'Fart girl.' The complete story is brilliant.
:) Liandra
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Haha, shame, poor guy. But like a lot of mis-fortunes, he brought it on himself. This is well written with your unique brand of humour. A great read.
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Haha, shame, poor guy. But like a lot of mis-fortunes, he brought it on himself. This is well written with your unique brand of humour. A great read.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
Comment from l.raven
OMG Michael, you are such a goof....where you come up with this stuff....the last man on earth...LOL..so very well done .....you make me laugh you....I luff Ya ...Linda xxoo
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OMG Michael, you are such a goof....where you come up with this stuff....the last man on earth...LOL..so very well done .....you make me laugh you....I luff Ya ...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
Comment from Nosha17
I'm on holiday in Wales, lots of mountains and good poetry fodder! I am catching up. This was a very amusing story, creatively written, with good humour. Characters are well drawn and the dialogue is very witty. Enjoyable read. Faye
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I'm on holiday in Wales, lots of mountains and good poetry fodder! I am catching up. This was a very amusing story, creatively written, with good humour. Characters are well drawn and the dialogue is very witty. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
Comment from Sasha
Why didn't you enter the contest??? This surely would have been a top contender. YOu got me to laugh with all the fun names and especially his. You have a terrific imagination and thankfully put it to good work. I enjoyed this immensely!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Why didn't you enter the contest??? This surely would have been a top contender. YOu got me to laugh with all the fun names and especially his. You have a terrific imagination and thankfully put it to good work. I enjoyed this immensely!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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I guess I entered the maximum amount or something. I actually could have waited till today. I even have time to come up with a different one! This was fun to write. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you!! mikey
Comment from sibhus
This was a different way to approach this prompt. Well, I suppose I shouldn't say different, more like inventive, becuase I would have assumed that no one else exsistead, but this wfits the criteria. Well written piece that is very humorous and makes for a great entry for the contest. Good story and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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This was a different way to approach this prompt. Well, I suppose I shouldn't say different, more like inventive, becuase I would have assumed that no one else exsistead, but this wfits the criteria. Well written piece that is very humorous and makes for a great entry for the contest. Good story and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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I was trying to find some new angle. This little prompt shows up from time to time! Glad you liked it, mikey
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a humorous flow of words, making for a very interesting read.There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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This is very well written with a humorous flow of words, making for a very interesting read.There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Hey, appreciate the compliments. Thank you kindly, mikey
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You're welcome, Mikey. Charlie
Comment from mfowler
Maybe, it was 'Putz' you heard, not Pulitzer. It's not a term we use in Oz, but it kind of fits this sad man. How would you be; lose the cpmpetition, have the tail served on a platter, and he can't keep up? Little wonder he was a saddo even in Millville, where all should be saddos. (Loved that town build up you gave). The cool dude line about astrological signs should have won many a lady, but he was too lame to even pull that off. lol. The humour rolls out; you give the genie in a bottle cliche new life; and you nearly win a Pulitzer. What a writer!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Maybe, it was 'Putz' you heard, not Pulitzer. It's not a term we use in Oz, but it kind of fits this sad man. How would you be; lose the cpmpetition, have the tail served on a platter, and he can't keep up? Little wonder he was a saddo even in Millville, where all should be saddos. (Loved that town build up you gave). The cool dude line about astrological signs should have won many a lady, but he was too lame to even pull that off. lol. The humour rolls out; you give the genie in a bottle cliche new life; and you nearly win a Pulitzer. What a writer!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Glad you caught the Millville build up. I thought that was funny! What a great review. Poor guy, worn out in a week. I could go at least ten days!! Thank you, mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
Without a doubt a certain winner. A clever unique take. Funny as can be with laughs that don't quit. The names and dialogue are classic. The premise is fresh in a very old prompt. NG
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Without a doubt a certain winner. A clever unique take. Funny as can be with laughs that don't quit. The names and dialogue are classic. The premise is fresh in a very old prompt. NG
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
