Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "She's The Only One For Me."A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
38 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
I really loved the art
work for this poem
Being happy is so
special within our
lives everyday.
Having lots of
fun is so important
in everyway.
Honey tree
I have no six left.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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I really loved the art
work for this poem
Being happy is so
special within our
lives everyday.
Having lots of
fun is so important
in everyway.
Honey tree
I have no six left.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Hey new friend.Not sure if we have met before. Appreciate the lovely review. Missing my sweetheart who has been in hospital for almost 5 weeks now. We see each other every day but not the same as being home here together. Thanks again. Hope you heard the music.
Comment from DSchlosser
Very nice short poem. I love the picture for the background that is awesome, and it shows the happiness that couples should have.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Very nice short poem. I love the picture for the background that is awesome, and it shows the happiness that couples should have.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the review. Not sure if the music still works. I noticed some of the poems music was not working recently thanks again.
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hey yeah the music is still working I should add and I will that the photo is us in Old Fashioned get up at Australiana Village in Wilberforce NSW. taken a year after we married.
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I did not hear the music when I viewed the poem. I wonder if I need to click on something. Either way, I really liked the photo. It's like one my parents took on their 30th wedding anniversary to South Dakota. They dressed up like cowboys from the Wild West, it was neat.
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Okay, I found out how to turn on the music. My computer was acting up and I had to accept having the media player play the notes. So, if I listen to the music, will the poem go along with the musical notes?
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Are you on PC or Apple Mac I know Apple/Mac has it's own version of Media player but on PC Windows media player will do it. Found out it comes on automatically here when you open up that page.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Love it, Geoff! I couldn't hear the music, but was able to sing riotously along in my head.
Look forward to more. Been out of the loop for some weeks. Trying to catch up on reviewing and get back on track. Hope all's well with you and the dear wife, friend.
Sonali
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Love it, Geoff! I couldn't hear the music, but was able to sing riotously along in my head.
Look forward to more. Been out of the loop for some weeks. Trying to catch up on reviewing and get back on track. Hope all's well with you and the dear wife, friend.
Sonali
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Hi Sis big change in my Autobiography if you read my profile you will find what has been done. pets now spread and MedicaL NOW SPREAD ALSO. Thanks sorry you could not hear the music :( arte you a Apple Mac person? Thanks again! Let you know when changes are done.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Well interesting blurb here mate did you meant to put this or more of the other? HEHE!! Thanks.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh good gravy, didn't I just review another non-sentimental, sweet romance poem by you? Once again, this is adorable! I love your presentation too, although I would have liked to see the second "for me" as the fourth line in that second stanza too (but that's my personal preference - I thin it stands out more that way). I'd also have loved another stanza - this delightful poem ended too quickly. :)
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Oh good gravy, didn't I just review another non-sentimental, sweet romance poem by you? Once again, this is adorable! I love your presentation too, although I would have liked to see the second "for me" as the fourth line in that second stanza too (but that's my personal preference - I thin it stands out more that way). I'd also have loved another stanza - this delightful poem ended too quickly. :)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Hi Dawn is it. Yeah I think there maybe some more verses I did have more when I originally wrote it...so who knows. maybe you read this before I added the music. Thanks so much for the encouragement.
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Thanks the "For me" is fixed and we will get some more verses on here at a later date thanks for the idea and silly I did not do it in first place!
Comment from Delahay
This is a sweet poem about two people who are obviously in love and able to overlook the times when they drive each other crazy, or perhaps to enjoy such times. I could not get the music to play.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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This is a sweet poem about two people who are obviously in love and able to overlook the times when they drive each other crazy, or perhaps to enjoy such times. I could not get the music to play.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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So sorry I might get it on my web site and maybe the music will work better there. I had a bit of trouble getting it to work on Windows Media player had to convert it from a Midi file to MP3. Perhaps you are an Apple Mac User in case Windows Media player will not work there I forget their alternative sorry. Thanks for a lovely review.
Comment from Eric1
Yes, you are right sankey, distant reminisces of a tune long gone, 'I'll be your honey bunny baby, you'll be my bee' anyway, i digress, this is a wonderful yet simple flashback to the roaring twenties, and just says all it needs to say, Lovely!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Yes, you are right sankey, distant reminisces of a tune long gone, 'I'll be your honey bunny baby, you'll be my bee' anyway, i digress, this is a wonderful yet simple flashback to the roaring twenties, and just says all it needs to say, Lovely!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Thanks Eric I was not sure it went up the Internal server error came up thanks for being first of the rank with the tunes anyway.
I meant to say I did not know the honeybun term was used in South Pacific we always used it between us anyway. Thanks again.
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You are most welcome sankey.
Comment from AnnieGale
Very sweet and endearing words. Love the sense of humor you put into this also, making you the perfect couple...great photo also. I liked it very much!!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Very sweet and endearing words. Love the sense of humor you put into this also, making you the perfect couple...great photo also. I liked it very much!!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Thanks again as above music coming soon.
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Music now on! And Changed last line in Second to sync with last line of first verse
Comment from DanielEkine
After every thing, she is always and the only one for you. No one else can take her away from you. She owns it all. She owns your heart. She is deserving. Great moment in the poem. Beautiful rhyme and control with artwork and presentation.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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After every thing, she is always and the only one for you. No one else can take her away from you. She owns it all. She owns your heart. She is deserving. Great moment in the poem. Beautiful rhyme and control with artwork and presentation.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks mate get the music on real soon and let you know. I really appreciate the lovely review getting a lot of really good ones.
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Music now on! And Changed last line in Second to sync with last line of first verse
Comment from judiverse
This is sweet. I enjoyed the rhyme and the easy-going tone. It's nice to read something light and not overly romantic. I'm not a fan of those who insist on dragging out as many four-syllable words as they can find. You've expressed your thought in a charming style. Love the photo. judi
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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This is sweet. I enjoyed the rhyme and the easy-going tone. It's nice to read something light and not overly romantic. I'm not a fan of those who insist on dragging out as many four-syllable words as they can find. You've expressed your thought in a charming style. Love the photo. judi
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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yeah we loved the old Australiana village where we got the photo done I call em my great great grandparents hehe hope to have tunes on both [poems later today. Thanks again off to the shops
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You're welcome. It must have been fun to pose for the photo. judi
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yeah my pants were only those drill type grey pants called King Gee here nothing fancy and it was clever how they overlayed Louise with all the "Old" get up! She was in her wheelchair underneath all that ha!
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That did look like fun. judi
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It was!
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Music now on! And Changed last line in Second to sync with last line of first verse
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Good for you! Got the music going. judi
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Great!
