Fleeting
A Poem about Childhood2 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Well done with this 5-7-5. The photo of a young handsome man reveals strength to the write. The syllable count is there. Best yo you.
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Well done with this 5-7-5. The photo of a young handsome man reveals strength to the write. The syllable count is there. Best yo you.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting. Yes, those childhood days do seem to pass swiftly as if blown away by the wind. And the memories we treasure the most seem to be from summers days. But adulthood must come. Well done.
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Very interesting. Yes, those childhood days do seem to pass swiftly as if blown away by the wind. And the memories we treasure the most seem to be from summers days. But adulthood must come. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
