Comment from Raphael Montonaro

Excellent

Nice surprise ending.....you did well.....I really like it!Good writing....Good form and content. The dialogue was great too!, and made this work!

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014

Thanks, Raphael, my friend. Yeah, dialogue, a very essential key element to short, flash-fiction writing. That, and an ending which catches you by surprise, and make you say, "Ah ha!"

Glad you liked it!

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I hope whoever it was heard Detective Mullins' confession. Seems his victim found a way to get even. A bad cop may be better off dealing with the zombie, tho. LOL Guess he's going to get what he has coming. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014

Thanks, Cindy. I'm glad you got the gist of it, at least. I appreciate you taking time out to read and review it for me.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Wow, this is really great! I LOVED it. One hundred word stories have a way of being either really great, or lacking WAY too much in the way of plot - this doesn't - it covers everything!!! Best of luck with this little polished gem!

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014

Thanks, dawn. I certainly hope you're right! I appreciate the review, my friend.

reply by Dawn Munro on 25-Jun-2014

My pleasure, author.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

No problem with the quotes and thought stream. You know of course that his greasy lawyer will get the confession thrown out and Mullins fired, right?

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 Comment Written 24-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014

Ha, yeah, you're probably right, LIJ Red...

Thanks for reading.