Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Your last line reminds me of an Alfred Hitchcock offering - not as good (sorry 'bout that) but makes me think he/she is mentally arguing the dastardly deed they believe they have committed.

Actually, I could write a story about your response to this prompt. Like it much.

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! Which is worse? Seeing a ghost bent on payback or being arrested for what he did? Either way, he's going to do some suffering. The police won't offer as much as her ghost might have, tho. Darn it. :)

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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Comment from Spiritual Echo

Excellent

Clever and eerie at the same time.

This very well written short story transmits a full story that whets the appetite and yet does so in an economy of words. Great.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is very suspenseful and has a nice twist at the end. Very good entry for the prisoner prompt and I wish you well.
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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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Comment from sibhus

Excellent

There's an amusing situation the killer is ratted out to the cops by his own victum. An inventive piece that makes for an excellent entry for this contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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Comment from Sean A. Chai

Excellent

I'd like to be there for that interrogation! How would the narrator explain it to the police? Hallucinogen? Confrontation with Scarecrow after he broke out of Arkham Asylum? Hmmm...

Good job on this story in so few words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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Comment from joann r romei

Excellent

This is interesting, and in just one hundred words, it must be frightning for killers to be tormented by their victims. good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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Comment from mfowler

Excellent

Nice one. The conversation is a great way to use the hundred words to best effect. You describe a switch of role between prisoner and victim, a moment of uncertainty, and a funny reveal completes it. Great setup with the text and images.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014

Thanks, Mark, and while it's a fun format to write in, it certainly does challenge you as a writer, I'll tell you that.

I appreciate the encouraging review, my friend.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

A haunting tale about the return of a ghost, yet was it the ghost?, I love the ending where the prisoner has confessed in front of the detective,

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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Thanks, Eric. I really appreciate the review.

Comment from Carole Rosa

Excellent

To the author of "Captive Audience" Great conversation between the dead and the killer! Good script. This would make a fantastic book!! Carole

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014

Thanks so much, Carole. I hate to see the bad guys win.

I really appreciate your review!