Comment from TAB_that's me

Good

I think it needs something more - interesting but did you actually write any of this yourself or is it just copied from the article?
Teresa

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014

Thanks, I will consider what you said and revise it. I thought we could copy written work but not too much of it. When it id a lot of words, they have be put in quotation marks. I though on this site we could just share thoughts. The down right way it was conceived means nothing to me, I just wanted to share how it started. Was this helpful.
In the meantime, I disabled it.

Comment from mjac777

Average

Interesting. Could have been a tad more comprehensive. Eg. How many fathers in USA, how much money Hallmark makes on Father's Day. Perhaps you could have compared what other countries do to celebrate Father's Day (if anything).

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014

Thanks, I will consider what you said and revise it. I thought we could copy written work but not too much of it. When it id a lot of words, they have be put in quotation marks. I though on this site we could just share thoughts. The down right way it was conceived means nothing to me, I just wanted to share how it started. Was this helpful.
In the meantime, I disabled it.

Thanks for the stars.