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Expressing Myself

Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "One Windy Day"
Writing my way out of depression / mental illness

6 total reviews 
Comment from Bina1
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Images of a sweet summer day! Thank you for sharing, good luck in the contest. A fine entry you offer here. Great art selection.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    Thank you Bina1, for your kindness and encouragement!
Comment from Green Lake Girl
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You have my vote. This was the best in the bunch. Great rhyming. Super artwork. Hope you do well in this contest. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much Green Lake Girl, for this kind and encouraging review!!
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest

syllable and rhyme spot on

good image portrayed of kite flying one need to hang on tight while it is in flight

cheers..Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much for your words of encouragement and for your insights!!
reply by Smoothiecool on 22-Jun-2014
    welcome..SC
Comment from Jean Lutz
Excellent
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In just a few words you capture nature, joy and wonder. You blend human nature -- that of a child -- and the force of nature very well. Best to you with this entry.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
    Thank you Jean, for this very kind and encouraging review!
Comment from jmdg1954
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level


kite
big eyed child holds on tight
flight

Wow, perfectly done. Not only is the syllable count correct, the rhyme is spot on and it all makes perfect sense. Nice flow and not forced.
Best of contest luck! John

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
    Wow! Thank you so much for your kindness and encouraging words, and I am honored by the six stars!!
Comment from zanya
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Yes a moment of bliss for the young child as he/she explores other worlds and possibilities on his all-too-fast journey towards adulthood

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much for your insights and kind and encouraging review!