Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 169 "Summer Delight"Small and Specialty Poems
8 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom - I could feel the breeze blowing and the soft sighs escaping as the calm washed through me. Really lovely work, nice imagery, solid rhyme.
Your author notes have some strange symbols but I was still able to pick up what your intentions were.
Great skilled work.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
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Dear Tom - I could feel the breeze blowing and the soft sighs escaping as the calm washed through me. Really lovely work, nice imagery, solid rhyme.
Your author notes have some strange symbols but I was still able to pick up what your intentions were.
Great skilled work.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
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Thank you Maureen. I'll take a look.
Comment from rod007
We all learn from the great master, 'rispetto' indeed but the words flowed well and one could sense the extreme relaxation you experienced as you lounged under that magificent tree. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
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We all learn from the great master, 'rispetto' indeed but the words flowed well and one could sense the extreme relaxation you experienced as you lounged under that magificent tree. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
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Thank you rod. It just needs a fishing pole.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I really love how you partner your own photography with your poetry. It comes across as very meaningful. I think your photography inspires your writing. Very well written poem. This time of year the breeze and the summer air is such a gift. You've captured this feeling so well, Tom.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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I really love how you partner your own photography with your poetry. It comes across as very meaningful. I think your photography inspires your writing. Very well written poem. This time of year the breeze and the summer air is such a gift. You've captured this feeling so well, Tom.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much Marietta. I appreciate you comment about the composition of photography with poetry.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"Summer Delight" is an excellent poem in rispeto format and meets the requirements of the form. It has excellent rhyme and rhythm and good flow. The figurative language and imagery are good. (pore possessed with charged energy)
Preston
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
"Summer Delight" is an excellent poem in rispeto format and meets the requirements of the form. It has excellent rhyme and rhythm and good flow. The figurative language and imagery are good. (pore possessed with charged energy)
Preston
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Thank you Preston
Comment from ProjectBluebook
You got that right! Delightful read. This reads as smooth as silk. Has it's own heartbeat. Was soothing and relaxing to read. Great job! I loved it! wackydo
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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You got that right! Delightful read. This reads as smooth as silk. Has it's own heartbeat. Was soothing and relaxing to read. Great job! I loved it! wackydo
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Thank you Wackydo. I'm glad you felt that beat.
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Anytime!
Comment from 9999pool
What better way to relax than under the shade of a tree and let the coolness of the breeze refresh and rejuvenate our minds.
Just lazing around with nothing much to do can be so peaceful with a calming effect on our souls.
Great write and well pen a Rispetto.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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What better way to relax than under the shade of a tree and let the coolness of the breeze refresh and rejuvenate our minds.
Just lazing around with nothing much to do can be so peaceful with a calming effect on our souls.
Great write and well pen a Rispetto.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Thank you Ritchie.
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed this rispetto about summer breezes and how they conquer one if he takes the time to enjoy them. I can almost feel the breeze in line 2 because of your use of s-alliteration to suggest its tickling sensation. You capture this scene beautifully.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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I enjoyed this rispetto about summer breezes and how they conquer one if he takes the time to enjoy them. I can almost feel the breeze in line 2 because of your use of s-alliteration to suggest its tickling sensation. You capture this scene beautifully.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Thank yo RodG, sounds like you can identify
Comment from Domino 2
Beautiful picture - my ideal scene with a fishing rod in hand, some sandwiches made by mum and some cans of coke in my rucksack when I was younger.
You capture the feelings of complete contentment and wonder with your well-chosen words.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Beautiful picture - my ideal scene with a fishing rod in hand, some sandwiches made by mum and some cans of coke in my rucksack when I was younger.
You capture the feelings of complete contentment and wonder with your well-chosen words.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Thank you Ray. I'd happily join you on that one.
