A Many Rainbowed World
answer to a writing prompt18 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
I guess one could say the world is a kaleidoscope of colors that few actually get to witness because they are fearful of letting others into their reality. Man has become taker a hoarder of things, things he is unwilling to give up or share. Your poem is well written and thought provoking to say the least. Very nice!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I guess one could say the world is a kaleidoscope of colors that few actually get to witness because they are fearful of letting others into their reality. Man has become taker a hoarder of things, things he is unwilling to give up or share. Your poem is well written and thought provoking to say the least. Very nice!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem, Hitcher.
I am glad you liked it.
Joan
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good poem written with a lot of reflection
in its message. So true is the colourful nature of things
and how we need to proceed as one instead of opposing each other. Well done and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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This is a good poem written with a lot of reflection
in its message. So true is the colourful nature of things
and how we need to proceed as one instead of opposing each other. Well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks and you're welcome, DD.
Joan
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' A Many Rainbowed World', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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' A Many Rainbowed World', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I appreciate your kind comments and continued suppotr, Duchess.
Joan
Joan, as always you're more than welcome.
the Duchess
Comment from pookietoo
Great poem. I love rainbows. I love trees. I wish you good luck in whatetever you write about. Take care and notice the little things in life. Keep smiling.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Great poem. I love rainbows. I love trees. I wish you good luck in whatetever you write about. Take care and notice the little things in life. Keep smiling.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you, pookietoo, for your review and advice.
Keep writing and stay healhy.
Joan
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Welcome
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Many Rainbowed World
by dragonpoet
Hello, Joan,
Good word choices that made me ponder. I have seen double rainbow at least once and I felt lucky...like finding a four leaf clover. it was awesome.
People also come in many colors ð???
Gypsy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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A Many Rainbowed World
by dragonpoet
Hello, Joan,
Good word choices that made me ponder. I have seen double rainbow at least once and I felt lucky...like finding a four leaf clover. it was awesome.
People also come in many colors ð???
Gypsy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Hi Gypsy,
Thanks for your nice comments and for all the stars.
Joan
Comment from amahra
This is a wonderful poem with a great message of hope for a better world. And humankind has been trying forever. United Nations was supposed to be the solution to world peace. What a joke. Great poem, though.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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This is a wonderful poem with a great message of hope for a better world. And humankind has been trying forever. United Nations was supposed to be the solution to world peace. What a joke. Great poem, though.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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I appreciate the review. Thanks.
Joan
Comment from royowen
One thing that I've always thought that God intended, but He knew we wouldn't come to the party, because ongoing prejudicial thought that it wouldn't come to pass, to mix together in one collusive mix, to be a United one. This is beautifully written Joan, an excellent post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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One thing that I've always thought that God intended, but He knew we wouldn't come to the party, because ongoing prejudicial thought that it wouldn't come to pass, to mix together in one collusive mix, to be a United one. This is beautifully written Joan, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your continued support, Roy.
Joan
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Most welcome
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Joan,
Well worded and food for thought. I have seen several double rainbows, not sure how they come about, but so pretty and mysterious.
But i agree we have many other colours that make up the world rainbow of life and people
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Hi Joan,
Well worded and food for thought. I have seen several double rainbows, not sure how they come about, but so pretty and mysterious.
But i agree we have many other colours that make up the world rainbow of life and people
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing this, Chris.
Joan
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a different and interesting take on the rainbow. You are so right, our Creator put colour in everything in this world, if only we will open our eyes to behold it. Rainbows promise peace and hope.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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This is a different and interesting take on the rainbow. You are so right, our Creator put colour in everything in this world, if only we will open our eyes to behold it. Rainbows promise peace and hope.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your insightful remarks and generous rating, Anne.
Joan
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You are welcome
Comment from HarryT
This is a fine effort pointing out the wonders of God's creation. I must admit I never thought of rainbows being other than in the sky. Thanks for providing a new insight. I really was taken in by stanza 3 and by the phrase "Renew petrified trust..." Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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This is a fine effort pointing out the wonders of God's creation. I must admit I never thought of rainbows being other than in the sky. Thanks for providing a new insight. I really was taken in by stanza 3 and by the phrase "Renew petrified trust..." Great job!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, Harry. I appreciate both.
Joan
