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Playing football for the young

Games begins for a friendship and happiness

2 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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I have to say that this poem is making very little sense in its current state. This is English that makes me feel like I need more oxygen.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
    Thanking you for is valuable expression.
    ashim pandit
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
    Thanking you for is valuable expression.
    ashim pandit
Comment from DanielEkine
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An unstoppable work.
"Where are you more goals
wins this team
And the was runners other
as you saw theme
1930 first world cup
first blowing series"
A joy to my soul it gives me.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
    Thank you for his marble feedback