History and Myth
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Comment from words
This one made me smile.
I can well imagine how the pair would feel if they were to suddenly find themselves in down town Minneapolis. LOL
Well done.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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This one made me smile.
I can well imagine how the pair would feel if they were to suddenly find themselves in down town Minneapolis. LOL
Well done.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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Thank you d, glad you liked it.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
Not only is "The Wrong Place"a superior poem because of rhyme, meter, figurative language and imagery but seems to have caught the spirit of the Man of La Mancha and his diminua tive side kick ,protagonists in one of the literary classics of the Western World and one of my favorite pieces of literature.
Preston
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
Not only is "The Wrong Place"a superior poem because of rhyme, meter, figurative language and imagery but seems to have caught the spirit of the Man of La Mancha and his diminua tive side kick ,protagonists in one of the literary classics of the Western World and one of my favorite pieces of literature.
Preston
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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Thank you Preston, I am happy that we connected on this on and appreciate the review and stars.
Comment from kiwisteveh
A curious sight to see in an American city, that's for sure! Is there any reason for their being placed there?
Some rather wry humour here - I liked the way you have the Don use a word that only came into existence based on his own name.
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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A curious sight to see in an American city, that's for sure! Is there any reason for their being placed there?
Some rather wry humour here - I liked the way you have the Don use a word that only came into existence based on his own name.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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Thank you Steve. I'm glad you picked that up, I liked that quite well myself.
Comment from sunnilicious
Lost... nonsense. Great visual imagery created. Creative. Expressive. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good sense of humor. Nice work.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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Lost... nonsense. Great visual imagery created. Creative. Expressive. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good sense of humor. Nice work.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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Thanks Alicia, never lost. Oh no!
Comment from Domino 2
It' seems good ole Don is very stubborn, and poor Sancho has to put up with him - I hope he's paid well.
Maybe they hopped on a concrete time machine with metal rails around it. Trouble is, I think they're stuck, as they left the controls behind.
Fun and entertaining read.
Cheers, Ray
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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It' seems good ole Don is very stubborn, and poor Sancho has to put up with him - I hope he's paid well.
Maybe they hopped on a concrete time machine with metal rails around it. Trouble is, I think they're stuck, as they left the controls behind.
Fun and entertaining read.
Cheers, Ray
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Thank you Ray. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Can't say I know the story but the picture is a little oddly placed for the nature of it. The story is well written and understood. Thank You for sharing this wonderful piece of art, both of them!
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Can't say I know the story but the picture is a little oddly placed for the nature of it. The story is well written and understood. Thank You for sharing this wonderful piece of art, both of them!
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Thank you Angel Debbie.
