Short Form Poetry
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Comment from linsbm
Heart has the connectivity with soul. Both work together, heart to energize the soul and soul to appease the heart. Perfect for the contest entry.
Soul is clearly defined in this poem as justified with a perfect conclusion in the last line. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Heart has the connectivity with soul. Both work together, heart to energize the soul and soul to appease the heart. Perfect for the contest entry.
Soul is clearly defined in this poem as justified with a perfect conclusion in the last line. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much. A great idea the sponsor came up with to write a companion to a previous work. Some good ones being entered.
Comment from MAB
Wow I really enjoyed getting the opportunity to read this! Has a unique subtle twist to the feeling at each moment Lively and lucid then into dark and dormant.
The fourth 5-7-5 is probably my favorite. Keep up the good work and best wishes in the contest
SAM
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Wow I really enjoyed getting the opportunity to read this! Has a unique subtle twist to the feeling at each moment Lively and lucid then into dark and dormant.
The fourth 5-7-5 is probably my favorite. Keep up the good work and best wishes in the contest
SAM
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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So pleased you liked this. An interesting contest. I liked this idea. Taking an old poem and writing an answer to it. Thanks a lot.
