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Comment from Nosha17
A nice simple view of life through your own philosophy. Basically, life was meant to be simple until the world got more complicated. But, it is what we make of it. You sound fairly at peace. I hope so. You have made good use of language in your narrative and descriptions and it read very well. Enjoyable read. Faye
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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A nice simple view of life through your own philosophy. Basically, life was meant to be simple until the world got more complicated. But, it is what we make of it. You sound fairly at peace. I hope so. You have made good use of language in your narrative and descriptions and it read very well. Enjoyable read. Faye
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Faye, I appreciate both the read and review, but I'd be far more interested in what you thought--agree or disagree. Every review, both mine and others from you, includes the line--You have made good use of language in your narrative and descriptions and it read very well. Enjoyable read.
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If I don't find any errors in the syntax, grammar, spelling or punctuation I consider that good use of language. If anyone does need corrections I give suggestions, yours do not, apparently. I consider it a good story or I wouldn't give five stars and there is nothing that needs changing. Hope this is helpful. Faye
Comment from GWHARGIS
I really think we all make a difference, good or bad. Some people do contribute more to the world. I am not one of those. I like to live in the shadows and watch. I did see that you posted this under fiction, was that on purpose of just a slip of the key? Anyhow, very well written.
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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I really think we all make a difference, good or bad. Some people do contribute more to the world. I am not one of those. I like to live in the shadows and watch. I did see that you posted this under fiction, was that on purpose of just a slip of the key? Anyhow, very well written.
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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I've changed it--shadow people, I can relate, but you better start polishing up your PR skills--you'll be going on a book tour.
