Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Tea With Whitmarsh"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
3 total reviews
Comment from comanalbert
The lane is broadening and the truth is balancing between many sides. The question is who had reason or gain in her dissapearance.
Great story so far!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
The lane is broadening and the truth is balancing between many sides. The question is who had reason or gain in her dissapearance.
Great story so far!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Thank you. Let's hope I can deliver on the promise.
Comment from Adri7enne
I like the serious "gum-shoe-style tone, in the search for a fairy. Makes me grin as I'm reading it. So serious, which makes it so amusing!
And Ess is up against that time clock - having to report back to Daisy's scary father. Still reading and grinning, snod. Good stuff!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
I like the serious "gum-shoe-style tone, in the search for a fairy. Makes me grin as I'm reading it. So serious, which makes it so amusing!
And Ess is up against that time clock - having to report back to Daisy's scary father. Still reading and grinning, snod. Good stuff!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Thanks. Yes, I think the fairy element might be putting people off, but I can see what you mean about the modern fairy image and the gumshoe approach. I'll have to bring Oz back in soon to lighten it up
Comment from A Matter Of Words
Ess' mind works hard and fast. I wish I could think that fast under pressure. I believe this is the first chapter of this story I have read. The work is well written and I liked the characters presented. Ess has mental strength and is controlled. Whitmarsh has just enough an aura of sliminess to make him a good Politian/Politian's assistant. An enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
Ess' mind works hard and fast. I wish I could think that fast under pressure. I believe this is the first chapter of this story I have read. The work is well written and I liked the characters presented. Ess has mental strength and is controlled. Whitmarsh has just enough an aura of sliminess to make him a good Politian/Politian's assistant. An enjoyable read.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Thank you. Ess is the hero of the story, so yes, despite her flaws she has to be pretty good at what she does. Thnaks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it